This seems very interesting. I would love to see more of it. And to find out why Lily is mad at James for telling her about the Slytherins. Maybe Lily is regretting not befriending Bellatrix in their school years? I don't know. But I would really like to. So you should add a chapter two.
Nice story! I think you could deinfinitely continue it, if you wanted. The story was posed so that even though it is sort of shot it still paints a good scene! added to story alerts, just in case!