it was beautiful. I think it would have made a nice story, but i have an active imagination lol
You did a great job!
CME

So cute. Very seet!

Aw, this was so cute, man I'm tearing p so adorable, love edward and his reactions, it's so funny

love jacob and nessie too

really good!
you NEED to write MORE!

is funny how ness see jake has her puppy. i love it! hehe

I love this story. I wish it was more than a one shot.

This is a great story can u please! make a next chapter i want to see what edward is going to do and what will happen to jacob and nessie thanks!

*chanting of sea of 15 yr old in my room ( there are 5 of us* CHAPTER 2 CHAPTER 2 CMON CHAPTER 2 HAHA MAKE IT LONGER!! WHOO HOO GOOD JOB MORE MORE MORE

Ahahha, I was cracking up at 'hey Edward, sorry about that, man, I'll see you later'. Lawl.

omg lol ut story's funni!! 'window', now thts the perfect title for a story like this, lol. xx

Amazing job, I loved the ending. Renesmee and Jacob are so cute together.

I LOVED this! :) I just finished Breaking Dawn and I fell in love with Jacob/Renesmee. I love the way you've made them interact and the sweetness to their relationship! Great, great story! I hope to read more from you soon. :)

My favorite Jacob and Nessie story yet!

Aw that was soo cute. Absolutely adorable too, hope you make more ^^

Nessie is just so cute ^^ I love her.
Ah, you made her dad go all crazy like everyone else. I personally don't think he would react like THAT. But who knows, Edward exagerates a lot.. so you may be right.
I loved this one-shot.