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Awesome chapter,
I hope you update soon cause I really want to know what happens next!xD

Wow! This is fantastic! I don't normally read FMA fics (even though I've been obsessed with it for years...), but this one really caught my attention.

Good luck with the next chapter!

*SB*

I am already enjoying this story. I like the banter you have between the brothers but without an indication of who's speaking, about half way through, I was confused as to whether I was reading Alphonse or Edward.

I very very much enjoyed that Edward can see how brittle Winry is and am looking forward to how he finds out more about why.

This is a good story. Please continue. Ed and Winry forever.

Great job on the fic so far! It's very well written. Keep up the good work.

Well this is my first FMA fic but I couldnt help it, it just sounded so interesting. So different. Yet im biased. lol
Ilove it. dont stop it okay. =D

You did a wonderful job i can't wait for the next chappie! Really good!

keep going! cool fic! can you describe what happened to them that landed them in a hospital, unconcious for three days? update!

Interesting beginning :) I'll be looking forward to reading more.