omg this chapter made me cry even more!!
it's so sad!

i told myself i would not read anymore tragic stories,
why you might ask?
i always cry!
and not even 2 chapters into your story made me cry.
please keep writing.
i wanna find out what happens, even though i will probably cry somemore

m i think this is a good beginning and a great idea...update soon k? ^_^ take care