Very interesting. I love Snape, as a character, and I like what you've done to show his inner turmoil, and also his relationship with Harry and with Dumbledore. Very nice.

cool story, great job . Loved reading it !

You write Severus well, I especially liked "He’d looked like his dead mother, and Snape is never going to forgive him."

I'd love to see you expand this to include CoS-OotP, maybe even HBP and DH.

Well done here, even though the chapters are short.

This is BRILLIANTLY executed! You write Dumbledore so well...just the right match of softly spoken pleas - but worded that they're demands - and just plain out ugly orders. He shows care for Severus, but only to the slightest degree, maneuvering and manipulating Severus into a corner. Dumbledore also keeps putting Severus down...

Ugh, UGH UGH, I do dislike Dumbledore! >(

Oh wow - such a great illustration of elemental magic here. Brilliant, first I've seen. An excellent chapter!

Oh, this is great. And Severus had to live with that man for 17 years! I am just amazed that he didn't kill Dumbledore sooner.

another interesting story. their relationship is such a twisted one. i like the way you write it. the complication of intrigue and trust. it's so riveting. it's hard to stop. and i feel for snape at each frustrating moment.

Fantastic! It's been a long time since I read a fanfic of this quatity! Your Dumbledore and Snape talk exactly like the original characters. It could be an extract from the "Prince's Tale" chapter for all I now!