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Bishie no Miko 8/29/02 . chapter 14
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA*inhale*AAAAAHHHHHHHH!...Hi. I worship you. ; Write more... geez write more... publish a book, too, and get on my required reading list...
Cece 8/29/02 . chapter 14
Another great chapter! So, everything seems to be going okay with Ran and Ken, if you ignore the fact that Crawford was staring at them.

I love your writing, and I hope to see the last chapter up soon!

Great writing!
lise 8/29/02 . chapter 14
Ohmigosh...you really do write *so* beautifully. I really loved this chapter. Hope to read more soon!
chibi koneko 8/28/02 . chapter 14
superbly written, and endearingly romantic in every sense of the word... i was so captivated by this chapter (not to mention the rest of the story)... i love how the action scenes are intense, and full of suspense. i have to keep reading, but i'm almost afraid to continue because i don't know what will happen next...

i'm sure you hear this often, but i just can't help but saying it again... you're such a wonderful author and i want to thank you personally for writing amazing stories like this... )

this will have a happy ending right? please say yes... you can't just stress me out w/ all the obstacles that ran and ken have gone through just to separte them right?

continue soon...

- ja ganbatte!
fei3 8/28/02 . chapter 14
Gods! *sobs* That was so beautiful. Erm, I dunno wat else to say except that you had my chest clenched so tight it hurts. There were tears in my eyes, and they were not because of sea-water (yah right Ran, sure we believe you).

I loved the scene of how Ken took the whipping for Ran. How he hugged Ran from behind, and how the redhead panicked.

I nearly weeped again in relief when Ken finally ended up with Ran.

Crawford is an ass. When will he realise that he feels more for Schu?

Please update again soon. I love this fic so much! Arigatou.
tearlesereph 8/28/02 . chapter 14
ahhh, I waited so long for the next chapter *tears in eyes* and now I finally get to read it!

*more tears in eyes* I can't believe that happened to Ken... too much pain happened to him *more tears* I could barely read that, that was just so cruel, I was in shock when Ran was going to be whipped but Ken? That's so much worse... *all out crying now* I hope Ken's alright!

Nikolai, he should be hanged from his toes and ripped into 10 parts and fed to sharks while his head is hung in the sun to dry up and shrivel! And Crawford too! Leaving any chance of saving Schuldich like that... and poor Schuldich too!
Carter Tachikawa 8/28/02 . chapter 14
Oh man, this story is sooooo awesome! I can't anything intelligent cause it's so good! Keep writing good stuff like this.TSA
Ann 8/28/02 . chapter 14
I am truly enjoying this fun, adventurous story! All the characters are engaging. However, if you've really killed off Schuldig, that would be very upsetting! I hope he survived the fire, because he still needs to make Brad open his eyes and see what he really wants... a certain spitfire redhead!
Inaho 8/28/02 . chapter 14
Mou...they still have to deal with Crawfish 'fore "happily ever after",ne? Not that I totally hate Crawford, but he let Schuldich die! Dang him! More icicle like than Ran.

Ai...more waiting for the next chapter...But good job, anyway!
Rinny1 8/28/02 . chapter 14
_ you finally updated! thank you thank you thank you! *glomp* it was so sweet when ken threw himself in the way of the cat... *sniffle* you've got such writing talent. next chapter soon! ;_;
Jin 8/28/02 . chapter 14
Ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod! That was so amazing. I felt so sorry for Schuldig...the way Crawford treated his death. *sniffles* You write so beautifully and so well. *starry eyes* I really love this. *crosses fingers for Ran and Ken*
kiske 8/11/02 . chapter 13
out of the frying pan and into the fire. You got to continue quickly. You have to. You're leaving all of us dying here. But this ifc is truly beautiful, I've read it twice and I've not grown tired of it. You can really captivate a reader's attention with the way you play the words, leave cliff hangers and fill the air with suspension.

PLEASE CONTINUE!
Trunks-chan 8/8/02 . chapter 13
*lower lip quivering* You killed Schu...? ... Ooooo, evil. *regaining composure* But that aside, another great chapter. Yay, Ran rescued Ken and Yohji got reunited with Omi... *cheer* Keep on going, the story is winding down and getting even better with each chapter. On a different note, what about Farfarallo? )
Inaho 8/8/02 . chapter 13
Ooo, I get to be the 200th reviewer. Anyway, very cool. But I don't want Schuldich to die! Move you're butt, Crawford! And no Farfie? Oooh...
Erfaciel 7/29/02 . chapter 13
*bows* I worship you, O Mighty Author! *hehe* Just kidding, but seriously, you have something great going on here! I was practically crying in frustration at the end, almost as if I was the one having to face the pistols instead of Ran and Ken! :-) I can't wait for the next chapter, hope to review again soon!
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