OMG all I can say is, it's perfect... *sigh* my favorite part was that on ep 14, the scene when Ken was defending Ran... *cries her eyes out* I loved it... XD one word: beautiful!

I LOVE THISS! - you're on my favorites!

i just found this fic yesterday, got me kinda curious and well... this is a good one. really cool... sugoi! i really liked it! _

"and he refused to be deterred from letting the redhead fight alone."
That sentence could use one more or one less negative. ;;

I never really did get around to adding my review in, but I thought it was best I read the entire story before I made some long statement, which probably won't happen because I can rarely think of anything to say when reviewing. Anyways,
I really liked this story, mostly because I'm a big Ken fan, and a lil bit of Ran thrown in there doesn't hurt either ;). I don't think I've ever really stumbled upon a story with a plot like this, or just a Weiß Kreuz story like this. It's was really well put together and imaginative. Kept me guessing what was going to happen, and I like that. All in all, good job!

*Huggles and squishes Kenken dolly to death.* Oh my good golly gosh! *barbie screams* that was seriously a great story, and at the same time, it left me with a sense of dispair.
This was so beautiful and detailed I thought my brain was gonna fry. (AND IT DID!) The dispairing part was about how the love between Ken and Aya remains unsaid. Although, I know their journey is just beginning and I am free to finish it in my mind, it still leaves me frazzled to know that Ken and Aya might never reveal their hidden feelings.
You've taken the rough, evil life of pirates and captured the beauty of sefarring. If these characters were yours, I'm sure you'd get published!
And also, I'd like to say thanks. Thanks very much for entertaining me with such a brilliant adventure.

Hell that was so exciting! oO *dies*

*dies* No! I lovey Schuldig! Well, I suppose he had to go bye bye and die on us for your story to work. I only wished Nagi and Schuldig could escape together. Poor Crawford too! I betcha deep down he really did like the readheaded assistant. *sniff*

God I just love your characters! Lol I can just see Yoji and his noble like air. And I just love your origional charafcters ass well, espacially Tim. He reminds me of someone...I donno. Anyways, great chapter!

Betcha anything that man will be Yoji!

Jeez...Crawford and Schuldig's really something as a team.

Man! That talk certainly gave me an idea of Ran's past. A few grammatiCAL ERRORS HERE AND THERE, BUT NOTHING BIG. aWSOME CHAPTER !

Holy camole! oO I only wish I had more time to finish up the story, thus sleep in peace. However, I would have to wait until tomorrow. Poo. Life's poo. What'll happen to Ken? And Aya? Will they have a happy ending? *dies*

My, my, I'm beginning to think that Ken was once a Captain himself! (jp) Anyways, things certainly look more interesting now, not that your story wasnt interesting before, but you know what I mean...hopefully.

I could always imagine Crawford in this time period. ; He always seemed, to me, to belong in the 1500s. Such a refined man he is! oO And the prostitue thing really disturbed me. Lol. Then again, I may just be naive, seeing as my thought was taht the only possible person Ran could ever be with was Ken. oO Beautiful poetic ways you have of describing Ran. oO