This has real potential! I love the entire idea - I can't wait to see how this progresses! I want to know the story behind the scar on Ken's neck, and what happened to Aya-chan that the ship is named "Redemption." Great job!

Whoa! great stuff. :) Definietely a lot of questions left to answer, so you CAN'T just leave it there!

I know, I know...I already told you that I really like this story so far, but I wanted to repeat myself! I love it! The characters are very endearing and I am really curious as to what happened to Ken in the past to 1.make him a slave 2. get this scar at the base of his neck and 3. he thinks he wont get "redemption" as is the name of the ship.

That means, you have to continue fast, ne? *smile* And where did you get Rans new name? Its somehow really cool!

Ja ne,Tschubi-chan