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emblem99
2009-10-12 . chapter 1
LOL I can't believe he asked UCHIHA-BASTARD! Hilarious!
Good job!
SunshineGirl09
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
Yeah, Neji agreed! Nice
oxsilvermoonxo
2008-12-27 . chapter 2
haha, yeah, the 'nee-chan' thing in the last chapter was probably just a typo xD
anyways.

mm, to be honest...yeah. the ending couldve been better >< but whatever. it also seemed like your description of the dresses were a little repetitive ("strappy heels, cascading from the waist" etc, ya know?) but again, whatever, it doesnt really matter. :)

yay! that was a fun story (haha, the begining was funny ^o^) nice job! >
oxsilvermoonxo
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
haha, i love it!! XD the whole "tennie-chan" thing was a bit...awkward (lol) and the bit with sasuke was hilarious (especially the begining. thats SO naruto!! haha)

oh, btw, 'nee-chan' means "older sister", and since its neji, im going to assume you meant "ni-chan" (unless...are you hiding something from us, neji? XD haha, jk, jk)

haha. GASP. theres a NEXT chapter? i think i shall go read it =D
lol
SMOKe13
2008-12-02 . chapter 2
super cute!
I.heart.Hatake.Kakashi
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
A! LOVE LOVE LOVE the GaaTen reference... i have a question... are these prompts going to be connected? that would be so cool if you could do it, but... it might be a bit difficult... still... awesome job with this prompt...

i even don't hate Sasuke too much in this... bravo... XP
The Cheez
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
Great story, very funny. Keep up the good work. And by the way, Hinata calls Neji 'Neji-nii-san', not 'Neji-nee-chan'. Neechan means sister, whereas Niisan means brother. Looking forward to the next chapter.
SMOKe13
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
aw that was sad what tenten said. it's true what hinata said! very cute! i loved it! great job!
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