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demonfoxboy132
2009-12-09 . chapter 1
oh my god this is funny and you really should write more chapter
peaches.kill
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
where's the other damn chapters? lol update.
neko-chan
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
that was grate! i never can fine any BXLIGHT and now here one YAY! i thank you =^.^= and cant wate for more *tummy rumbles* "feed me" XD lol
MLMsky4life
2009-09-29 . chapter 1
:) Like the idea, but I somehow found the switching between Light and Beyond annoying after you mentioned it^^ I dunno, I just started focussing on it...But I still like it:P Oh, who is it that Light is engaged with?:) Is it L?^^ Yes..:P No, if it were, Light would've probably noticed Beyond resembling L:P Then, who is it?! Misa?! Takki?! Nyo! It has to be L!!:D Like it, continue!!:D
Mia-Gabriella
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
Oh! I really like this!
B is insane - I love him.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Please update soon. :):)
xXusagixnoxhotaruXx
2009-06-07 . chapter 1
Aww, is that all? No more updates? D: This was really awesome. This was seeing B at his calmest, and seeing how his mind works. PLEASE CONTINUE~ <33
Aki WildQueen
2009-05-16 . chapter 1
I love stories with some kind of psychoanalysis! Please update soon!
Mr. Bunny and I really enjoyed your story!
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Anna Tramell
2009-05-03 . chapter 1
Oh, Nilah-san, you are quite amazing, but when you pair with Kani-san... I see something even MORE amazing taking place! A perfect characterization, a wonderful plot idea...ah... I demand more from you two! And - and - I'm going to go read some your stuff, Mikanis! Because I know I won't be disappointed!
Hoko
2009-04-23 . chapter 1
i like this... it's interesting. wanna update it? :D i would like that. a lot.
keep up the good work!
Dozing Dead
2009-04-23 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really interesting. I feel bad for letting the email alert sit so long before actually going off and reading this. Very well written, I never would have guessed that this was originally a roleplay if you hadn't have mentioned it. Although, the two of you do have different styles.

Please update soon~!
anime-4EVER44
2009-03-26 . chapter 1
update soon
DarkBombayAngel
2009-03-10 . chapter 1
I really like the chapter. It is very good and very intresting.
Dion Damiani
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
Wow. What a mind-blowing first chapter. Ugh, the fanatical reader in me is restlessly annoyed with having to wait for the next update -- it will be very interesting and most entertaining to see how a relationship (however twisted) might form between these two. Their interplay was certainly captivating - my eyes were glued to the screen. I could imagine that B, having encountered this "attractive" young man with brains and guts to match B's "mind fuckery", would find the impending meetings with Raito quite compelling -- a refreshing break from the probably dull prison life. I'd like to see how B thinks of these interviews while in his cell, waiting.

Some of BB's antics wrought quite a few chuckles out of me. Again love the witty humor Nilah's so gifted with (I haven't read anything of Mikanis yet - but I will in due tome!), and I love the simple logic behind B's sharp sardonic replies and vindictive thoughts. Raito's characterization here, like in Nilah's other fics, has an interesting approach. We were never really given to know how he was like before he went crazy with the death note save when he had lost his memories, but I imagine he was hard-pressed to show his naturally darker side while chained to L. I'm not too sure he would have been so cruel as not to warn the guards in the end -- he was such a goody-two-shoes, but I like this ending much better -- with Raito having the last laugh and yet allowing B to take his revenge -- even if his reason was that the guard's deserved the repercussions of their own stupidity. I just loved how you wrapped this up! Raito's such a love-able asshole and I'm sure B will soon be thinking along the same lines.

Gotta go. Look forward for more! It's been a while; hope you guys are doing well.
Rin5o
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
Wow! you made my day, the awesomeness of it! Can't wait to see how BB influences Raito^^ please update!!
SakuraCa
2009-02-27 . chapter 1
Just wanted to say that I found this story extremely interesting. I haven't read the novel yet but BB sure sounds very interesting.
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