aw! that is really all I can say right now, you sort of melted my brain :P

:trundles off singing seasons of love: ;)

lovely imagery, concise, nicely balanced emotions.

I was only thinking rather sadly today that summer is nearly over and autumn is on its way.

This is one of the most poignant "Jack loses everything he loves in the end" stories I've read. Really does prove that sometimes, 'less is more'.

Just right. Nice job, Erin.

*squeal* RENT... *starts singing Seasons of Love* I alway thought that song was so Janto..

I mean come on...COFFEE!

I loved it!

that was so sweet and sad. Beautiful, as always!