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centuryshorty
2009-07-15 . chapter 1
amazing job, I hope u write sams reaction
Risitakez
2008-11-13 . chapter 1
Excellent so much feeling in the was Leah thinks.. Her story is sad but she is a strong character & i love her for that. Shows u can continue to live even after the one u love leaves u for another.
I'm glad she left Sam's pack Jacob is a better Alpha!! =)
persephonesfolly
2008-11-07 . chapter 1
Good rendition of Leah's POV. Her torment and the impossible position she was in comes through very clearly, especially in lines like:

"...was enough to make me want to put a bullet in my head."

You write her very well.
Peace Like a River
2008-11-01 . chapter 1
Very nice. :-) I like how you get into Leah's head.
Angeliss
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
Wow... After BD, I found myself far more interested in Leah than usual. And this... Well. It encompassed everything that drew me to her, /while/ keeping her in character, /and/ being wellwritten.

Thank you.
The Twilight Awards
2008-09-14 . chapter 1
Congratulations! This story has been nominated in "The Breaking Dawn Round" of The Twilight Awards for the following categories:

Best Breaking Dawn "Missing Moments"
movieandbookgirl
2008-08-31 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really good! You don't often see Leah's POV, so that was refreshing. I hope it won the challenge.
ol2bob
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
loved it! I need to see more good Leah stories around here. ;)
Mar-Mar21
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
Oh I love this! It's so nice how you can actually write like Stephanie! I like Leah's reaction and how she want's to get over Sam. More soon.
MajoringInMinors
2008-08-19 . chapter 1
Very good, I could imagine Leah thinking this. You have much talent.
Katherine-The-Crowned
2008-08-19 . chapter 1
Great job! Loved Leah's point of view. It's great to see someone different's thoughts. And the emotions in the story were wonderful. Again, great job!
Orions-eyes
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
This was fantastic! I loved hearing Leah's POV - you did such an amazing job!
dlhk
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
Excellent chapter. I loved getting to peek into Leah's mind and really see what prompted her to leave the pack and go w/ Jake, whom she normally can't stand. I felt so sad that she had to go through staying so intimately tied to Sam when he didn't want her and there was nothing she could do about it. I loved that she had a choice. Great job. --mob
BlackKeys09
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
My goodness..you are insanely good at writing different people's point of views. it was interesting seeing into her mind even more then we did in the books..and you definitely made it as good as it was in the books.
withthevampsofcourse
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
ooh i really like what you added. subtle and good, love!
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