 centuryshorty 2009-07-15 . chapter 1amazing job, I hope u write sams reaction |
 Risitakez 2008-11-13 . chapter 1Excellent so much feeling in the was Leah thinks.. Her story is sad but she is a strong character & i love her for that. Shows u can continue to live even after the one u love leaves u for another.
I'm glad she left Sam's pack Jacob is a better Alpha!! =) |
 persephonesfolly 2008-11-07 . chapter 1Good rendition of Leah's POV. Her torment and the impossible position she was in comes through very clearly, especially in lines like:
"...was enough to make me want to put a bullet in my head."
You write her very well. |
 Peace Like a River 2008-11-01 . chapter 1Very nice. :-) I like how you get into Leah's head. |
 Angeliss 2008-09-30 . chapter 1Wow... After BD, I found myself far more interested in Leah than usual. And this... Well. It encompassed everything that drew me to her, /while/ keeping her in character, /and/ being wellwritten.
Thank you. |
 The Twilight Awards 2008-09-14 . chapter 1Congratulations! This story has been nominated in "The Breaking Dawn Round" of The Twilight Awards for the following categories:
Best Breaking Dawn "Missing Moments" |
 movieandbookgirl 2008-08-31 . chapter 1Wow, that was really good! You don't often see Leah's POV, so that was refreshing. I hope it won the challenge. |
 ol2bob 2008-08-25 . chapter 1loved it! I need to see more good Leah stories around here. ;) |
 Mar-Mar21 2008-08-20 . chapter 1Oh I love this! It's so nice how you can actually write like Stephanie! I like Leah's reaction and how she want's to get over Sam. More soon. |
 MajoringInMinors 2008-08-19 . chapter 1Very good, I could imagine Leah thinking this. You have much talent. |
 Katherine-The-Crowned 2008-08-19 . chapter 1Great job! Loved Leah's point of view. It's great to see someone different's thoughts. And the emotions in the story were wonderful. Again, great job! |
 Orions-eyes 2008-08-18 . chapter 1This was fantastic! I loved hearing Leah's POV - you did such an amazing job! |
 dlhk 2008-08-18 . chapter 1Excellent chapter. I loved getting to peek into Leah's mind and really see what prompted her to leave the pack and go w/ Jake, whom she normally can't stand. I felt so sad that she had to go through staying so intimately tied to Sam when he didn't want her and there was nothing she could do about it. I loved that she had a choice. Great job. --mob |
 BlackKeys09 2008-08-18 . chapter 1My goodness..you are insanely good at writing different people's point of views. it was interesting seeing into her mind even more then we did in the books..and you definitely made it as good as it was in the books. |
 withthevampsofcourse 2008-08-18 . chapter 1ooh i really like what you added. subtle and good, love! |