Hey, i just wanna say that i like where this is going.
i know its completed but i just thoughts id give you a thumbs up :D
i've always wanted Bishop as a romance option in the game, sadly, that did not happen..
Well, i like the way you make him out to be, its the way i would have done it :D

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I never saw Bishop as pedifile and I still don't. However the orignality and banter, and insults in this chapter is something to be congratulated. You might want to rate this 'm' though. I am not sure if this is good a for any younger audience.

Might want to do some proof reading. I'm thinking you mean "wench" not "wrench" It really distracted me and made it hard to take this real seriously.

Heh. It is to laugh at him. It certainly gives some appropriate backstory for his rude coment about wenches at the beginning of the OC. It also gives an extra reason for him to be cut a break later in the story.
The early part, where he was toying with the slavers, seems a little rough and it seemed like perhaps too many sentences were "He (verb)" Why would clothes mean slavers? Perhaps they had unusual equipment? A hint as to where this is taking place might be good, and Neverwinter has never had implied slavery.