|Reviews for A Visit to School|
| Sarcastic Musician 10/18/11 . chapter 1
Okay so I have to say this story is amazing, I didn't see any mistakes and it flowed really well. I think it'd be a shame for this to go unfinished so I'm going to plead for you to continue. I don't have the best ideas but maybe one of these will help:
could do one from Illeana's POV of this same chapter
2. you could set the next chapter at lunch and have those guys making Karsh jealous (this is my favorite idea, I'm a sucker for jealousy)
3. you could do it in one of the other guys' point of view.
There are plenty of options please considering continuing if you aren't at the moment. :D
| TWitches Fan 8/7/10 . chapter 1
Soo cutee! Best couple ever! Awsome storyyyy! 98989898989898989898989898989 stars out of 10
| Figaro7 8/20/08 . chapter 1
this was good
you could have a chapter about from her piont of view or them talking after class.