 My-Little-Emmilette 2008-08-19 . chapter 1oh my god! i freaking love this story!
it is so cute, i love the way u wrote the dagger part, i cant think how hard it was for marian not to smile when robin held ehr so close! lol
my favourite part is the end where he sneaks back into ehr room and lies with ehr on the bed! the letter, so perfect
"You will always be a part of me" aw!
anyway for ur first fanfic, jesus christ it was good! lol
mine was liek something you read to babies! hehe but i hope to read more for u soon, more robin marian fluff obviously!
ur new fan
Emma
xoxo |
 Tigger101 2008-08-18 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this! I watched the finale last night (you know, in between finishing my Physics assignment, LOL) and this did a lot to ease my post-watching depression. xD
I think you really balanced the line between sweet fluff and diabetes-inducing drabble very well - there wasn't too much mushy dialogue
I have to admit I thought you were a bit cruel to Guy - I don't think Marian is so cruel as to be so dismissive of Guy's... obsession with her. There's a mixture of pity, guilt and fear that you could have highlighted more... (then again, this IS a fluff fic, and Guy kind of kills the mood. No, I don't like him either.)
Characterisation was wonderful, though. And Robin's kiss as he ran from Guy? Brilliant, and a good suprise. I could just see Jonas Armstrong's crooked grin in my mind when I was reading.
Keep writing RH fic - I'll be reading! ;) |