Aww Cute!

Awe. I loved it. And yes, please write more Suspian. I just love them.

hey, ur fic was v good. i havnt read "Changing Destiny" i'll read it after this. I hope 2 read more by u soon. Keep up the good work! xx

Hey, lovely story I just wanted to let you know that Narnians didn't have cross bows they had long bows/re-curve bows.

A cross bow has a trigger and the actual bow frame is parallel to the ground. They are used often in Vampire movies as a weapon of choice.

Just thought you might like to know. I love the lost scene idea though, you're a very good writer.

Sweet story! Really really liked it. You had a proper usage of italics and i definitely think that you should do more Suspians. Keep rocking!!

YES PLEASE!

this one was very good, and i would love to see another.

PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER SUSPIAN ONE SHOT! ha ha this was so great! I would love to see you write another one.

Tory

this was a very cute very sweet story! I'm starting to think that maybe they should have left that scene in! lol

You have worked your magic with the romatic fluff stroies yet again! I So enjoy reading your romance stories cause they are so emotionally intense, and the paion and love that the charaters feel for each other is portrayed So vividly it is always a thrilling and breath taking read!

you did A great job! Keep up the good work. and by all means you should right more romatic one shots!

So the movie comes out on DVD in decmeber? Do You know when exactly? Hope it's in time for christmas. I hope that maybe they will put some of those deleated scenes on the extras of the dvd. and the bloopers like they did on the first one. :)

Brilliant ^^ The few scenes with Caspian/Susan in the movie was oh so right and I love the pairing ever since. Your piece is, if you excuse the pun, "right on target". Thanks for sharing!
Aimael

i loved it =)

i always wondered what this scene was. now i know :)

eek!! "had his plan worked after all?" does that mean that caspian was only pretending to not be able to use a crossbow? also, for some reason, i felt that the bow you described would be like a recurve bow or like the ones used in the movie. a crossbow just doesn't feel right. especially in the clip that the deleted from the movie, caspian wasn't using a crossbow.

It wasn't any good. :D
It was absolutely SPECTACULAR. :D
And yes, please write another Suspian one-shot. :D

Oh gosh, I so loved this! I am going to be vastly disappointed when the dvd comes out and the actual deleted scene can't top this, because I am positive it won't be able to. :) Excellent job!

Absolutely lovely, the conversation between Trumpkin and Susan was kind of funny. Darn that dwarf he doesn't miss anything does he? The moments between Susan and Caspian were just as lovely I liked how you intrepreted this deleted scene from the movie into something of your own. Good job!

I can't wait for the last two chapters of "Changing Destiny"!! I hope you haven't given up on this fic, it would be a shame if you did. Maybe you should make more one-shot fics involving Susan and Caspian, that would be just wonderful!