Good story.

Beautifully written. In my opinion, Vaan should have gone with Ashe because she needed him more than Penelo did. Hope you make more of these fics. 5/5

That was soo cute! Ashe and Vaan are my favourite pairing and I'm so happy you made a great tale!

That was wonderful and sweet I hope I can reda mopre of your writing

Wow, that was beautiful. Well paced, and more a focus on the emotions. Loved it. Definetly one of my favourite Vaan/Ashe fics. i really hope you write more :)
Take care

If there's anything that's bad about this, it's just the not so clear time skips. It takes a sentence or two to realize you're not in the same moment as you were before. I would suggest separating the moments by at least double spacing from the end of a moment to the beginning of the next.

Other than that. I loved it. =) There needs to be more Vaan/Ashe fics out there, and I'm glad to see that other writers are venturing towards that pairing at the moment =)

Hope to see your works in the Ashe/Vaan section again. Caio!

i must say that you have done a wonderful job with this story vann/ashe is my favorite pairing