A great story. Very good.

J as bastard as always, the only good thing of the new Spiderman world is him without the Bugle, the rest sucks.

It was a good "What if?" fic. I doubt Peter would say no, imagining Mary Jane in prison sorrounded by true criminals (some send there by him) is enough reason for register.

You ended it with a cliff hanger, why ?!? :(

I mean I would have really like to see what would be Peter's reaction in this story. If he would have just said no to Tony once more ? :(

Anyway this was a great one-shot, but I was hoping that it would have been continued. :(

Still keep up the great writing for future stories. ;)