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Kurai Akuryou no Joou
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
Aww >.< Too cute! Haha
cakeesuki
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
ROFL sasuke is one horny uchiha~ XD reviving the clan indeed, psh, he just wants to get busy haha
math music reading
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
Aww, that's so cute and sweet! Hinata really is adorable, the idea of Sasuke being able to resist is futile, utterly hopeless, he should to be helpless when it comes to one person.
shy.smile
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
so cute..^^
American Daydreamer
2008-09-24 . chapter 1
*singing*: "I don't wanna close my eyes. I don't wanna fall asleep 'cause I'd miss you baby, and I don't wanna miss a thing. 'Cause even when I dream of you, the sweetest dream would never do. I'd still miss you baby, and I don't wanna miss a thing."

Hehe. Sorry, that song popped into my head while reading this. Anyway, cute fluffy fic! Something tells me that the only time that Sasuke would be romantic is when nobody's looking, even his own lover. So I love the idea!

You have a nice talent for writing indeed. The only thing I'd like to point out is to go easy on the fancier words. I found myself tripping over them sometimes. The thing that helps me with that is reading it aloud to make sure it flows well. Other than that you do a good job! I can't wait to see more SasuHina from you!
Jaime Snyder
2008-09-08 . chapter 1
XD That was adorable.
otherrealmwriter
2008-08-28 . chapter 1
Aw this is so sweet. I love SasuHina. It's the best one there is of the Sasuke pairings and Hinata pairings too. :)
Caliraphy
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
Aww, I thought this was soft and sweet, complete with pleasant little tinges of humor, and such beautiful sensuality, too *sighs* I enjoyed this very much, and I think the T-rating is safe, nothing hardcore or the like =] *favorites story*
SarahiNia
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
Can you say...STALKER! ...lol but seriously this is so cute I loved it and SERIOUSLY a genjutsu...more like I used a Genjustu on Hinata to LOVE a DUSHEBAG like YOU! lol ...Sorry...but love this so cute!
Harpygirl91
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
LOL! Sasuke would do that!
blackraven615
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
Oh goodness that was just awesome and cute. Freakin' love this.
sasodei-iz-awesome
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
Yeah the T rate is okay. Kawaii for Onii-chan's b-day
Hopeful Forgotten
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
Hahahaha, that was great! XP

Yeah. T's okay for this story. I mean, really. Read some of the others--they're a LOT worse than this. :P Sasuke was perverted and all (but, amazingly, in a very Sasuke-ish way.) but he was never explicit with her. ^.^

Funny, sarcastic, and slightly mean, you're story came out well! :)

The Ninja Lord
HeartBrokenHinata
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
hahaha Sasuke
NeverFeartheDreamer
2008-08-19 . chapter 1
lol I enjoyed the ending, it was splendid!
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