Very impressive. I really enjoyed it. This fic had all the ingredients- tragedy and sorrow, humour and some nice fluff at the end. I could see the chemistry between Kal and Diana right through, especially in the bathtub scene- hilarious, touching, sweet, all at the same time.

Your beta did this? She's got a gift for this pairing, that's for sure. Maybe you could coax her to write another one, or even write one with you if she's unwilling.

Aww, that was so sweet. You did a great job of capturing Diana's pain in the first part, and Clark's return was so hilarious, the way he fell on top of her.

I simply adored that bathtub scene- very touching, and then all hell broke loose! Would've looked great in animation.

Clark's a real sweetheart in this- he's charming, laidback, mellow, everything a gal wants right? I like that episode too, it seems as if she was inlove with him and didn't even know it, plus the producers were dead against it :( But your story compensated!

Thanks for posting this. It sure made my day! More sm/ww fics from you please :)

I LOVE IT

I liked this fanfic. The tragic moments, the funny moments, the romantic moments - all are in place.

Very impressive job, and it's based on the ONLY JLU episode (next to Paradise Lost) I actually liked. This is going straight into the C2!