While this story is... odd, I think I'll enjoy coming back to the TT fandom with this. It'll be a little sad lacking 3/5 of the team, but you play with Raven and Beast Boy so nicely... definitely looking forward to more cracky adventures. XD

You've taken a very unorthodox approach to Raven and Beast Boy's relationship and it truly is refreshing to see. Some might call the subject material of your most recent chapter a stretch, but the logic behind it is beautifully sound (and the Author's Notes were more than helpful, thank you) and I really look forward to how more events unfold. I love how you've chosen not to do it chronologically, as well; it will be interesting to see how subsequent chapters fill in the gaps of what we don't know yet and tell us more about this strange little family. (On a simpler note, I also wanted to thank you for giving Raven and Beaut Boy's daughter a pretty and relatively normal name; the variations of birds, goddesses and shades of purple in some fics are getting so tiresome!)

All in all, excellent story! Please update soon!

Dude, this is really cool. I like where it's headed, it seems really interesting. That guy KungFuTruffle (what kind of name is that anyway? A lump found by pigs in a forest with martial arts ability is little far fetched to me) is an idiot and is a waste of your time. I honestly don't know why you felt you need to explain yourself to him. Though I'm kind glad you did, it was a tad confusing :)

I'll back you up on the "male pregnancy" details. Garfield can identify as someone of the male gender even if he is biologically a female, and you solved my issue with the male pregnancy storyline--anatomy. Men don't have a uterus, women don't have sperm (but some species have parthenogenesis, and some take it a step further by having simulated sex where one partner takes the "male" role and the other partner becomes pregnant).

I'm still quite curious about those Canadians, but this explains a lot about the background of the night Garfield remembers, and maybe part of Raven's reasoning for starting every night over with Garfield/taking his memories. She knows the pattern, she's in control, she feels less likely to hurt him.

Really, though? Raven in this story is an insane and twisted version of show-canon Raven, and it's fun to read. Garfield's been changed around to suit the alterations in Raven. Other-Titans would be interesting, Canadians are still a tease, the daughter is still fun to watch... you can follow whims on this story. There's a lot of places where it can move.

yay!! an update on this story!!

wow...did not see that one coming...in any way, shape or form.
its an interesting take though, and given how raven has surpressed her humanity...i can see how a pregnant garfield is possible.

Well, this adds to my theory about the relationship between Ava and Her Royal Majesty. HRM got pregnant, then dumped her daughter onto Garfield for nine months. Probably didn't even hold his hand as he went into labor, or, well, she might have shone some, but probably none. As for Her Royal Majesty, I wonder what she'd feel if one day she killed Garfield. All alone except for her daughter, who she doesn't necessarily have a good relationship with. I wonder if HRM will feel anything. I'm certain Raven would, but HRM isn't Raven, so to speak. Raven, although not very social, did care about the people of Jump City, and her friends. She would have died for them. She probably would have carried Ava too. Big difference I see between HRM and Raven is that, Raven most likely cared for Garfield enough to not wipe his memories and hurt him whenever they made love. HRM is the opposite, though. What will happen if she gets pregnant again? Will she leave Garfield memories of that night and carrying a baby? How, if she erases his mind, will be able to convince him the baby is his? After all, to his knowledge, they haven't had sex in over a century. Maybe Ava's words will get to him, hit home. Or, would Her Royal Majesty have an *shudders* abortion? I wonder if she's been doing that since Ava was born. Each time she gets pregnant, just boom, baby dies.

Imagine if Garfield got his memories back. Of every night spent with Her Royal Majesty. Would he be angry with her for erasing his memories? Confront Her Royal Majesty about possible abortions? Or maybe finally see that Her Royal Majesty isn't the person he fell in love with. A demon in disguise. True, Raven is the half-demon daughter of Trigon, but, in embracing her demonic heritage, whatever humanity, whatever shards of the caring she possessed, disintegrated. Gone. Is it possible to get the old Raven back? To end this Apocalyptic nightmare? If Ava or Garfield found out, would they do it? Would they restore world peace?

Sincerely,

Raven of Alaska

Ava... well, I can sense a great rift in her relationship with her mom. I think it has more to do with just how Her Royal Majesty treats her dad, and others, for that matter. Maybe Her Royal Majesty never loved her. Maybe Ava is secretly working with an underground resistance movement to overthrow her mother. I want Ava to win, if she and Her Royal Majesty fight... but I think it will most likely,be Her Royal Majesty who wins. Who knows? Maybe Ava will get lucky. Or maybe Her Royal Majesty will spare her, perhaps banish her, and erase Garfield's memory of their child. I wouldn't put it past her to do it.

I wonder, does Her Royal Majesty "care" for her daughter just like Trigon "cared" for her?

Sincerely,

Raven of Alaska

One day, this will make for many expensive hours of conversation with whichever psychiatrist you ineviatbly end up giving your pension to. not because of the events in question so much, but the fact that you took a perfectly logical (for a given amount of logical, true) set of steps that ended up with... this.

Well, I laughed at it, anyway.

MNBP

I love the idea of the Great Canadian Uprising. As a Canadian I agree that even if a demon took over the world 'we' would fight back. Also even though there where other uprisings ours was 'the Great Uprising' awsome.

you're mad. you're absolutely, bally-lutely mad.

i think i'm in love- with your writing. what, you didn't think it was you, did you?

i wonder, would this be considered a male pregnancy piece now, or something else entirely? but then again, he is female... at the moment. huh, i wonder if she does that to him every night? and yes, i'm using the pronouns 'she' and 'him' very loosely.

and rae's still a softy. that leaves a pleasant smirk on my face.

and Canada is the awesome (or it was 'til rae razed it to the ground- you've got to tell me what they did).

missed you at TT. cya 'round. iraq... ain't that bad.

Mpreg? Really? I thought you were a better author than that.

I like it. really neat idea. Poor beast boy. lol. good job. keep it up.

Didn't see that one coming. That would have to be the ultimate in bad morning experiences. Great chapter, looking forward to reading more of this. I have to wonder though, with this change, what sort of companion does Raven have for him/her? Poor Gar, that very thought would be scary as heck.

I have no words.

Raven is amazing and I love this version of her. It's fun and evil and why the hell does she not like to be called Raven? And what did she do to Canada and what possessed them to try and kill Garfield? And she has a TAIL! I think that's the best part.

So what happened to everyone else? And while I kind of get what the Change did I'm wondering what was the catalyst for it and what cause Gar to stop aging too.So many questions for you.

And did she make Garfield a girl for the reason I think she did?

Poor Garfield.I'm not sure I like the pain and suffering and weird love that Raven is bestowing upon him. But I'm damn sure willing to see where this is going.

I figured it out. This takes things to a whole new level in weird. :S

And the next can only be more so.