I really enjoyed your story, finally, Obi-Wan can leave the restrictive order and find happiness in this fanfic! Great story Lady, keep it up!

I read the story because I expected something that won 2nd place on the obidala fan forum for a good reason. But frankly I don't get why this story won any place. It is way too short to touch my readers heart at all. It's a happy sappy fluffy piece. With stories like this I understand Padme/Ani fans a lot better. Obi-Wan would never just tell Padmé he's in love with her, Ani would not just go away for meditation (!) and jeez Obi-Wan would not just leave the Jedi Order to live a long and peaceful life with Padmé. *faints*
Don't get me wrong. I'm a huge Obidala fan. These two characters were my reason to love the Star Wars movies in the first place. But what you are writing is just so out of character. I see the names there, but not the characters George created. *shakeshead*