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currently in pain for the "not so good" ending.

still, another well written shot -i could feel the adrenaline and the raw emotions in this :) despite the end (i don't quite like bad endings) it was astoundingly good. :)

i can see gokudera admitting all of his reasons to not fail are due to egotism, since he's always been like this with tsuna (deluding himself to be needed when in truth, he kept being impersonal and failing at his 'chosen position' job.

this collection keeps getting better and better :P

SOY

ok, another beautiful shot to add to the series.

another really well done one, with great characterization and smooth flowing, I ached for yamamoto the whole time, because really, it was clear he hurt a lot. at times it was painful to read, especially his despair when he realised gokudera wasn't breathing anymore. i think you really hit the nail with how he felt, and it was heart wrenching.

the whole final part, about the revenge tsuna got, it was really something else, too. i think you're working so well on those shots, and the dynamics and the plot bring out certain details of the characterization that make it all the better :)

(sorry for the short reviews... but i'm so blown away by your writing that my brain melts away... ^^; )

SOY

oh, this was beautiful, as well, and painful of course.

the delicate way you wrote off the torture scenes, without going too much in detail and yet still managed to describe the pain and the situation, as well as gokudera's thoughts, reactions and attitude, were deliciously perfect (i'm a bit of an angst fan, you know?).

it had me reading this whilst shivering all the time, so good it was -so realistic, pulling me in until i had finished the shot...

every single detail was very well portrayed, and it was an awesome read, too. beautiful second shot. i want to comment on a few details, but i'm too overwhelmed by the sheer strength of the story to even remember them, sorry :P

SOY

this first drabble is positively amazing.

I like how it sweeps through the narration with ease and smoothly, and the descriptions are the right amount to tell it out without burdening it or making it too heavy.

i also like how the characters are portrayed, especially gokudera, and his thoughts and actions.

it is a very well thought out drabble and i really enjoyed reading it, so i'll be moving forth :3 gokudera's my fav chara, and it's nice to read something well written about him :P

thanks for sharing. :)

SOY

I'm rereading this again >.>U This is... the fourth time? Still awesome.

... Guh.
I really, really wanted to leave a good review, and then I get to the review box and realize I can't do that, because there is no way I'll ever be able to translate into words how amazing this series is. (You might be able to?) So I'm just going to wing it over here.
My favorite is probably the first track, because as much as I love the 8059 in the third and fifth, in the first you just wrote him so unceasing and badass and so completely /Gokudera/, and I have no idea how else to put it. Actually, the fourth was the only one I didn't really think that way about - don't get me wrong, it was still written impeccably - but the first chapter... I don't know, I guess it sort of hit me in the face with how awesome it is. And that's a good thing.
You write Gokudera amazingly. I want to elaborate on that, but it's just... That's how it is. Simple and blatant. Plus your magnificence killed my eloquency.
I want to say your writing as a whole is great, but great is one of those words where it got so overused that's its meaning was downsized. Kind of like amazing. Damn. I'm running out of words to describe this.
Long story short, I love you, this story is too breath-taking to be defined in words, and I'm going to cut off this review before I start talking about stalking you.
... Damn. Too late.

Aw That's all? SO freaking sweet!
Yama aw Gokudera is so adorable and well suicidal! You tortured him pretty badly... poor dude.

Well, I am not going to complain since Yamamoto gets more and more attracted to our dearest Gokudera. SO YAY to Angst!

wai, sweet series!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Greatly anticipated(not trying to put pressure here).

This is a really great fic! You actually really stuck to the characters and the situations are more realistic than even the series can get; I do admire the way you show how truly difficult their lives are!

Really, seriously loved it~

I honestly don't understand why there aren't like a hundred reviews for this because you deserve at least that many. I nearly gave up on this fandom as I couldn't find any fic that wrote the characters right (in my mind...) and then I stumbled onto here and ... just wow. mind simply blown away in how well you wrote the characters, their actions, the great scenes, and how you seriously pulls the reader along the story, making them honestly feel for the characters (I winced reading all the injuries Gokudera recieved and pretty much went 'aww' over all those really adorable scenes between Gokudera and Yamamoto... By the way, I honestly think you portray their relationship wonderfully!!), and *pokes*... You're awesome and I can't wait to read more of your fic.

I'm so tired I can't think straight right now, but this made me very happy.

Such a great chapter, your writing is always fantastic. Poor Dera was perfect in this being so jealous and pathetic.

I totally, TOTALLY LOVED it~! Wonderful~I dunno...but I really REALLY loved the eh...middle plart...I was like...so worried for Gokudera...? But I think there should be more fics like this...I've read TOO MANY fics where Tsuna dies, leaving behind his guilt-stricken guardians...ESPECIALLY a certain depressed storm guardian who thinks that he failed his tenth...D: This fic is DEFINITELY going into my favourites!:D Can't wait for your next update! Please do update soon, kay? -begs-

From,
The Absolutely Hopeless Goku-fan

This is so heartwarming and in-character!

These shorts are so very well written and exciting. I especially loved the 3rd one, the emotions were captured great. Keep up the good work.