The first few chapters aren't making a lot of sense

First off, you spelled learned as learnt. Second, isn't Pokesav a cheat-thing for NDS Pokemon games (heehee)? And third, nice chapter. Update soon, if possible.

I think school hates me too, so I'll be patient. Do you like my reviewer name?

I love this story please continue.

Interesting. Glad you're back though! Maybe, if you have time, you could check out some of my Umbreon fics!

Yes! Update!
This chapter was good & that Shaymin was unexpected.

OMG! Next chapter please! (i love you fanfics!)

NOW the story makes sense again. Good chapter too.

YES! I GET IT NOW! Update soon, I can't wait for this battle!

Y'know this story sounds more and more like the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. The clans, territories, leaders and even the vigil that they wait out before they evolve's like the vigil apprentices wait out until they're warriors.

Great story, but the ending does not make much sense.

Better wait until the next chapter.

Before you there were six, this six other Eon forms i bet. Siblings? Interesting. Wonderful story, by the way. Whatever happened to make Umbreon's egg end up in normal clan though? And whatever happened to the other eggs? They couldn't have been in normal clan unless many more had been banished. Is he going to have to find others who were banished though? Sorry, i'm asking way too many questions which will probably be revealed as i read the story.

Ooh! Getting good! I still think you should write whose POV it is at the beginning unless you're gonna stop switching. Its really confusing sometimes. Anyways, update soon!

I wonder how this story will go. And please write whose point of view it's from, like the Umbreon you could write Umbreon's POV.

GBP GuyBoyPerson. Sparkly Emerald's brother
Awesome story. Like it so far, but how exactly could he have gotten covered in blood? There wasn't that much it seemed like. And they didn't explode. Also, why would a Gardevoir die from it's fin being severed?