hope u will update soon! it's a really interesting story!

i absolutely LOVE this fic! i didn't think here were any Darkangel fic out there. *Does happy dance* this is really good, i really hope you decide to continue it!

please update I like this and haven't found much bout this series..

I love the darkangel trilogy and am so happy to see a darkangel fic.
Please update soon and DON'T STOP WRITING

this is a totally great fanfic! please write more soon! as you can see by my name i love the darkangel trilogy, but there dont seem to be any fanfics out there for it... so i'm happy to have found yours. update soon.

Well...a short chapter, and I don't see 3 and 4 around, but hey! I can wait! We need more Darkangel fics! Will this Calli/Aeriel be reunited with her brother, cousins, and Irrylath? Please continue!

Hi I think that is a good story so keep writting please it's so hard to find fics about this book!

Luv your story! hurry and UPDATE!

Very impressive. I believe that you have the canon facts in place, along with a good storyline... my only suggestion would be to get a beta-reader; there were a few mistakes. If you wish, I would be happy to beta for you (or act as a secondary beta, the gamma, if that's what it's called).

Are they all golams, then? It seems that they have lived well beyond the normal life-span of humans. Perhaps they are going in the same direction as the Ancients did on Oceanus.

Hello there Twylise! Uh, this is Jezebel speaking...er...typing. I'm very disappointed in you! You haven't updated this story in oh... a year! :) J/K. But seriously, you need to get going. I can see that you've had time to post other fics as of April, and yet no new chapter. Argghhh! You absolutely cannot leave us hanging there with so many things unexplained.This is a warning, if you do not update soon , or at least e-mail me with what you have so far, then I will be forced to bombard you with flurries of e-mails. :)hehehe( hmm, flurries, doesn't quite make sense, but oh well) :) I think I've passed my limit of smiley-faces in one review, I'll go now...

Luv'ya!

P.S, I just read this thingy at the bottom of the review box, and it's ordering my to basically make a suggestion to an already perfect story, no matter how futile that seems. So here it is: make sure in the next chapter when you're explaining the situtation, pace yourself. Don't throw all the info at the readers at once and let them fend for themselves. You're doing this perfectly right now, but just to give you a heads up, 'cause most people don't really get what's going on in that genius head of yours.;)

Ooh! I really like it! Very cool! Could you please continue it? I see you haven't updated it for awhile, but please?

Oooh, interesting. I was kinda disappointed that you pushed this fic way into "modern times". I liked the whole medieval-ish/science fiction thing that Meredith Ann Pierce originally had, but oh well. And IRRYLATH LOVES AERIEL! Notice I said "loves" and not "lovED", because I truly believe he will stop it nothing to get her back. T_T *Sniff*

Very good. I'm a bit confused as to how they are in what seems to be contemperary Earth since the impression I got when reading the book was that they were on the moon of the future, but its your story so dfo whatever you feel works. But I really hope you plan on continuing this. I really want to see what you do with it especially with Ariel meeting everyone else. I always had the impression that Hadin was in love with her::shrugs:: but that could just be my imagination. I also like that you had Roshka and Erin get together though I think Irryalth did love Arial, but I'm a romantic so I'm willing to believe. Please, Please continue! I'm really curious as to how all this will turn out.

hey that was good...keep writing...i want to know what happens

wow, I've always been looking for a "Darkangel" fanfic and here I found one...I really liked this although it was a little vague and confusing...but wow...