Love it! it was a bit confusing at times but i understood what was going on. keep up the great work!

Powerful and wonderful! I like the characterizations of the movie folks and your original characters as well. The pace of the story made it hard to have to stop reading at any point. Very well done.

Awesome story! Sorry it took so long to review. So Jareth and Sarah will be dating from now on? Is he going to go back and forth from the Labyrinth to Sarah? I like it because it will give Sarah and Jareth some time to get to know each other some more and rekindle their relationship. I know eventually she will go with Jareth to the underground... I hope! I liked that ending. Very promising.

Great chapter. I loved this story.

A.P.

I just finished your newest tale, and I have to say it was another great story. I love all of the extravagant means Jareth goes through to get Sarah back into his life.

Can't wait for your next adventure of the two stubborn, star-crossed (cross-dimensional) lovers.

interesting ideas in here with just enough twists to keep it all fun to read :)

This story was good but not one of your best.
waiting impatiently for your next one...and I hope it will be soon.

NO!
I thoght that there would be more.
I like how you brought out that his eyes had been cruel because of the pain within them, it was a neat description.
Could you please write a sequel? Pretty please.
I loved it simply loved it.

I enjoyed this fic very much! It was short, but full of detail. I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Is there anyway I can bribe you to work on "Hook, Line & Sinker"? :P

*smile* Another wonderful tale, spun by a masterful bard, Auntie Paisley.

I always love your stories, and once again you have outdone yourself.

Thank you for including me in your story, it is exhilarating to see my name in text, and in a semi-major role. Again thank you.

Yours eternally,

Alexandraya
Blessed Be

Good ending.! Keep smiling. :-)

*smiles softly* It was a pleasure, as always, to read. I like the soft, somewhat vague way that this particular chapter in their lives ended. It was good all the way through.

What?! That's it? The end? Just like that?! (falls to her knees dramatically) NO! (glares at PaisleyRose) I love you, but if there's not a sequal to this I may be forced to send hordes of smelly minions after you. Dirty pixies with sticky fingers, and so forth.

And thank you for writing, Paisley. Thank you so much. It's been a lovely ride.

Aha! Tobias! Yay for an unwitting (or is it witting?) Sweeney Todd reference...and this chapter is love, did I mention that? I especially like the downfall of Ruth and Jareth's little talk with Robert. Oh, they're going to be a wonderful couple, our dear JarethXSarah.

O.O The Williamses are coming home to a houseful of rock star and unfortunate friends...this should be fun.

But meanwhile, now Sarah and Jareth are friggin' ENGAGED, Didymus and Hoggle are official protectors...or whatever you wanna call them, and Jareth has license to protect Sarah's house and its inhabitants forever more. I love the complexity of the Fae court laws. I wish I were able to write things like that. My hat is off to you, Paisley.