it's bittersweet, i like that

poor jake...

I loved this! Very well written and eloquent. And sad, too. Just all around incredible. Nice, nice job. :)

It's so sad...you're making me cry...

Aw. That short story put a smile on my face. (:

You really should write about when Jacob sees Bella for the one last time before she.. changes. If you haven't already. :)

Aw, so sweet :(

aw damn why couldn't she end up with jacob

Mm, not angsty enough :D

But I love it