This is a pretty well done story that is well thought out and enjoyable. While there is one or two things that is stereotypical. It's disappointing that you have not continued it especially when it into it. I truly hope you get inspired to continue this work.

I for one, want more.

It's wonderful!

I'm curious!

Update soon!

Please!

I beg you!

This was good!

I find myself compelled to continue reading actually but you deserve some praise in my opinion.

I'm not really that good of a writer so all I can say in the way of a constructive review is keep up the good work.

Was that helpful?

Maybe not. But I've only read one chapter and I like it already!

Really Interesting, it deserves more reviews and/or recognision.

Sigh. This was such a fine start. It's one of the most honest looks at the depths of Ranma's dilemma that I've found. Such a shame that it ends just as it really gets going.

Hate to see the story just end when it was getting started. Just wanted to let you know that I thought it was a very introspective look at Ranma life, and well written.

this really dosnt belong in onna ranma C2

ARGH! I try to avoid situations like this... ones where I read a lovely story that leaves me yearning for the next chapter, and there seem to have been no sign of life from the author for years. Oh well. If you're alive, drop me a message, kay?

Lilz

Interesting existential dilemma. I suspect I know where you'll be coming down ...

It would have been interesting to have seen this story continued, as it was off to a very intriguing start.

It's good for a "Ranma escapes his life to try being a girl" type of fic. A liitle short though.

C

hey veryu intriguing story? so the female part of ranma is taking a greater part in his life eh? hm never tought of that , ho well it seems rather very good. i just have one question tough... is fumiko a lesbian or what?she just seems to have too many interest in ranko, not that its bad hehehe(lecherous smirk) hahem ! anyway keep up the good work man!
from the self-philosopher, talantus
" if we have many personna do not try to hide them or crush them, instead, try cope with them or deal with them "

This shows lots of potential. I really hope you eventually continue it.

I like the story, the pacing and the dialouge. I'm looking forward to the following chapters.

Ok, I'm going to give you the bad news first. I have your e-mail addy and if you don't continue to write this I will pester you until you have no choice if you want me to be quiet! (Ohohohohohoho obligatory Kodachi laugh) Now, Interesting and very well done, with out a single moment of slapstick or combat, you've made a very compelling story. Having finally finished reading the Ranma storyline, I can see exactly which incidences you are drawing on for Ranma's inner conflict, and see why he reached this solution to attempt resolution. The psychology is compelling, and while I do belive that sexuality is more a response of personality and knowledge than just a biochemical response, the questions Ranma asks him/her self are fairly universal in a large portion of society, particularly teenagers. Rumiko played around the edges in Ranma 1/2, this is doing a wonderful job of addressing it head on. Please keep writing it... Or ELSE!

sounds like a cool story, keep it up!