 Pen Against Sword 12/7/08 . chapter 1Aw, koky, I didn't know that you had posted this, and it has no reviews! This makes me a sad panda. I quite liked this piece.
I am very fond of the witty dialogue between the two of them, and I think you did a very good job creating an original character that mattered even though she only exists for this one shot. I love Saix, and imo, you did a good job characterizing him.
Excellent work, dear. You're getting better all the time. |