chap 17: soap! yum yum

Oh my gosh I can picture this whole scene in my mind. You write dialogue for Snape that is so believable I feel as if I'm there as a spectator. This whole story is awesome, but this chapter stands out. I do not know if you even check these reviews anymore, but I felt compelled to do one... BRAVO! Thanks for writing.

interesting story

Amazing story!

"Now he had so little he could offer his godson. But what he did have he gave freely. Love and comfort. Two things Harry seemed absolutely starved for."

No matter how many times I read that line, it always gets me.

Great Job!

As good as any I've read. Thanks for a well-written and engaging story loaded with great character exploration and development, some interesting plot ideas and great execution!

Sirius got up a few hours later, grumbling about having missed breakfast and being hungry. But by lunch time Arabella had them safely settled back in her small cozy cottage at the kitchen table, each happily spooning up a bowl of home-made "SOAP."

Hum great story so far...Can't wait to finsh it! But there was a small mistake that I thought you might want to fix! Unless they were eating soap and not soup...Thanks

*J*

I love how Harry is more focused on not having his firebolt rather than his wand.

Great job.

great story!

Well, I wasn't planning on reviewing 'til the end of the fic, but an extra one can't do any harm _

It's more just to say I absolutely loved the scene with Sirius and the thermometer. It was hilarious! Honestly, Sirius is such an idiot sometimes!

please write more i loved it all

summer after fourth year? he's acting much younger. like 11 actually...not like 15 or 14

Do we ever get to find out who Snapes "date" was that gave Harry that awful box?

Ops, that was a question, not a review. One review coming right up: A tight, well written, well thought out and great story line. Almosr wants to make me rush through to get to "Family Relations" and the rest of your stories.

One comment: You DO have a thing for poisoning your characters, yes?

Cool fic - can't wait for the sequal.

harry a real teenager.

Great story! i really liked the whole thing! -AJ : )

you really are great at writing the perfect words to come out of these character's mouth! I am reading this in my computer class and it is silent right now and your story is making me want to laugh but it is too quiet to laugh. its an awesome story so far! i gotta read more, and hopfully i wont laugh out loud and cause everyone to stare. -AJ : )