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| Jimbocous 2008-05-21 ch 50,  | abuseAs good as any I've read. Thanks for a well-written and engaging story loaded with great character exploration and development, some interesting plot ideas and great execution!! |
| *J* 2008-05-16 ch 17, anon. | abuseSirius got up a few hours later, grumbling about having missed breakfast and being hungry. But by lunch time Arabella had them safely settled back in her small cozy cottage at the kitchen table, each happily spooning up a bowl of home-made "SOAP." Hum great story so far...Can't wait to finsh it!! But there was a small mistake that I thought you might want to fix!! Unless they were eating soap and not soup...Thanks *J* |
| crazyme03 2008-01-12 ch 4, | abuseI love how Harry is more focused on not having his firebolt rather than his wand. Great job. |
| Shanya-hp 2007-10-22 ch 19, | abusegreat story! |
| Shanster 2007-10-17 ch 18, | abuseWell, I wasn't planning on reviewing 'til the end of the fic, but an extra one can't do any harm ^_~ It's more just to say I absolutely loved the scene with Sirius and the thermometer. It was hilarious! Honestly, Sirius is such an idiot sometimes! |
| Hairspray07fan 2007-09-19 ch 4, | abuseplease write more i loved it all |
| jayley 2007-02-28 ch 3, anon. | abusesummer after fourth year? he's acting much younger. like 11 actually...not like 15 or 14 |
| knightsbridge 2006-09-14 ch 26, | abuseDo we ever get to find out who Snapes "date" was that gave Harry that awful box? Ops, that was a question, not a review. One review coming right up: A tight, well written, well thought out and great story line. Almosr wants to make me rush through to get to "Family Relations" and the rest of your stories. One comment: You DO have a thing for poisoning your characters, yes? |
| Heksie 2006-07-17 ch 50, | abuseCool fic - can't wait for the sequal. harry a real teenager. |
| AJ-Plays-With-Fyre 2006-02-26 ch 49, | abuseGreat story! i really liked the whole thing! --AJ : ) |
| AJ-Plays-With-Fyre 2006-02-24 ch 19, | abuseyou really are great at writing the perfect words to come out of these character's mouth! I am reading this in my computer class and it is silent right now and your story is making me want to laugh but it is too quiet to laugh. its an awesome story so far! i gotta read more, and hopfully i wont laugh out loud and cause everyone to stare. --AJ : ) |
| AJ-Plays-With-Fyre 2006-02-24 ch 18, | abusei liked this chapter a lot! sirius is pretty helpless sometimes. loved the funny things that sirius said especially the part about the instructions coming with the kid or the themometer. i gotta read more! --AJ : ) |
| AJ-Plays-With-Fyre 2006-02-23 ch 9, | abuseI like the being caught in the back of... church part! that was pretty good save, though most teenagers would understand or atleast have an idea what they were talking about. Great story so far! --AJ : ) |
| CelticHeiressFiona 2006-02-12 ch 50, | abuseAwesome fic! |
| Me The Cat 2005-12-29 ch 50, | abuseThis is a very well written story. My only problem with it is that Harry seems more like a seven year old then the fifteen year old you claim he is. He acts like a little kid and then says something way too mature. Other then that this is a good story. *Me The Cat* |