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Breaking Dawn was my least favorite book, but I didn't hate it at all. But what you have written here.. It's so touching! Daddyward had so much potential!!

:)The exchanges between father and daughter were wonderful. Poor Edward though... he is always so troubled. If itsw not others' thoughts getting to him ... its his own thought consuming him in worry.

Beautifully crafted! Bravo!
I love Edward he is my favourite character and having the insight into what he went through is a dream come true!

I love your writing style and your grasp of SM's characters, you are truly talented and your respect for the characters is obvious.

That is very well done! I was a bit disappointed not to get more of an insight into that part of the story in the book. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Whoa

I read this back in August, but never reviewed -- sorry. I really love this story and I think that you really understand how Edward thinks. There's not so much interaction between Edward and Renesmee in BD, so it's wonderful to see these glimpes through Edwards eyes. You really "get" Edward and I also love your other stories, particularly DSM, but I really enjoyed As Bella Sleeps, Seduction and Music Lesson. Really well written!

One word: Amazing. Okay... four words: This was amazingly good. Now it is on my list of things to vote for in the sparkle awards!

Aw!! :) The pefect daddy-daughter moment... I wonder how surpised he would've been when he learned she slept...?! B+.

Great story from Edwards view. I love the duality of Edward being torn with concern for his wife and wanting to care for and protect his child. Very well done.

Again another wonderful story! Edward meeting his daughter for the first time brought tears to my eyes!

Again, you did a wonderful job. I really loved this, and it was a great and needed addition to the book. I would have loved it though, if you would have used the dialogue spoken between Carlisle and Edward just before Bella wakes up, and then of course her awakening, but it was just incredible reading this peace.

Wonderful writing. Great and thorough story.

Thank you for this piece. I don't think I have read anything about this specific interval in BD and I have always wondered how Edward spent his time between Renesmee and Bella. Your piece really demonstrates the struggle Edward must have gone through well. Is there any chance you will continue this up until Bella wakes? I would love to see more Edward/Renesmee time and also know how he dealt with Jacob and the wolf pack situation during Bella's change. Anyway, thanks for all the insights you offer here. Great stuff.

oh this was so good. I love Alice, "I can't see a damn thing" That was just too good. Would you consider writing all of Breaking Dawn through Edward's eyes?

So very good!