aww! that was really good! Edward sounded really in character, and everything was just right, completly in tune with the books! nice job! i started tearing up there... D

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This was very good. I liked it. Nicely written too. :)

That was amazing. Few people can really grasp Edward in a way that doesn't over characterize him or neglect certain aspects of his nature. You did a great job avoiding both.

This was a beautiful story. I just love how you tied all the loose pieces of the lost moments together.

That was GREAT! I could almost feel his pain. Crazy!

You write Edward so well! I love reading all your stories.

thanks for writing this in edward pov ! i loved this.

Beautifully done! I'll admit, I had my reservations about whether anyone but SM could do a competent Edward POV, but you've won me over.

My favorite line: "She promised to keep her heart… our heart beating." What a great job of combining Edward's romanticism with his pragmatism.

Thank you for the fix!

Absolutely breathtaking! This could be slipped right into Breaking Dawn. Fabulous! Loved the Ed Pov!

I really enjoyed this story, very well written as all of yours are but i wish i could have seen a little bit of Edward feeling guilty over having wanted to get rid of the baby when Bella was pregnant. Maybe you could write a story to fill in the blanks when Edward and Bella return from their honeymoon and see the rest of the Cullens for the first time and the discussion that ensues about the baby and keeping it...or not. i have always been curious about this. Great job though!

Just...Aw :_: That was lovely. I thought that Breaking Dawn seriously lacked in father/daughter time between Edward and Renesmee and this was absolutely lovely. Well done.

So cute. Very good. :]

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Love this! I love that Edward goes through all the emotions, and how much he loves both Bella and Renesmee!

Amazing story! This is how I would have imagined Edward during that time. Thank you for your story!