Absolutely amazing! All the emotions of this story were conveyed SO WELL. I felt his torture, his bittersweet happiness, everything. There are no words to describe how much I loved this, even though I am trying. :) Great work!

Absolutely incredible. You have a gift for getting inside of Edward's head. It was as if I were reading Stephenie herself. Thank you for this glimpse, seeing him with Renesmee was beautiful.

I really really liked this. This goes perfect with the book. You did an awesome job.

I know it's terribly ridiculous and not very grown up but somehow Stephenie's stories got under my skin. I found them after the first three had already been written so I was able to read them all in quick succession. It was as if I left reality behind and just became part of the Twilight world. I know I'm not the only person to experience this but it is very uncharacteristic for me to become so emotionally attached to fictional characters. So when Breaking Dawn was finally released I was so excited to read the final chapter in Edward and Bella's story. I have already written you about just how disappointed I was that Edward and his thoughts and feelings were so very absent from the book. It is with extreme gratitude that I write you this little note to thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing those parts of the story that I most wanted to hear. It has almost been as if I have been grieving for a lost friend. I know it makes me sound crazy. It has been so therapeutic to be able to read your two stories that give insight and perspective about the little family we so love. thank you, Thank you , Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent. Please write more!

That was the most beautiful one-shot ever! You are so amazing and did an incredible job with Edward's POV! Thanks for sharing!

Absolutely amazing! I don't think anything could have made this better. It's spot on.

My favorite line from Alice- "But I think I know her well enough to predict that she wouldn’t want to be stark naked when she does open her eyes.”

Great work, as always!

That was wonderfully written.. I thought I'd get to see a happier Edward.. but I just felt like crying for Edward or giving him a hug throughout the WHOLE book.

WOW.

It really feels like Stephenie wrote it. You sure that you're not her in disguise?

you are amazing.

This is one of many things that was missing from Breaking Dawn. Very Sweet thanks!

Loved this ... so good. :)

That was absolutely beautiful. I love anything in edwards pov but you have a very sophisticated style of writing and I really enjoyed that first chapter. Hope you update soon.

*TrulyANerd

Oh, lovely.

If you felt like tackling Edward's POV when Bella wakes up, I would love to read that, too. :)

this was perfect! please continue you should do a pov from everyone else and resnesme!