WOW! loved this.

Your stories are amazing. Sometimes when I read, I forget that this isn't Stephenie's writing but fanfiction. The need to read certain parts from another point of view are completely satisfied. Thank you so much.

If I could request a scene from Edwards POV; you've written about Edward when Bella was unconscious, but I would really love to read about when she wakes up for the first time after her transformation.. I'd love that part form his POV.

I've also read Dark Side Of The Moon, also amazing. I can't wait to read more by you..

Love from Amsterdam,

I really enjoyed this.

wow!

that was amazing. Your a great writer!

what a great Idea to write this missing scene!

I enjoyed your true to character Edward- which i think you actually expanded on in a great way.

Very sweet to fill in all the missing pieces.

truely a great read. excellent ending, except of course I wanted more.

Excellent!

That's a really great story - I just love it!

Keep up the good work!

Angelmercy

Beautiful and amazing story. I think that it was wonderful that you thought to write about the time durring Bella's change. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

this was excellent.

i especially love the dadward and renesmee interaction.

so sweet!

Oh, so unbearably sweet!

I've always missed this moment from BD, so thank you!

Your Edward POV are amazing, as always :)

aw

this is so beautiful !

please write MORE! i really love this, :)

brilliant writing!

Love, laughs and lollies,

Nadia Cullen

i love it especially the moment when edward realizes hes a father although you should have made more of a big deal about it you should do edwards prepective of when bella holds nessie for the first time i would love to see how you interperate that

Just when I thought that I couldn't enjoy one of your stories more, you go and prove me wrong. This was SO FANTASTIC! I loved this chance to see Edward taking care of Bella and then his first thoughts about how much he loved his amazing daughter. (I'm almost tearing up just writing this.) All of this is why I love Edward so much as a character: he loves Bella (and now Renesmee, too) with his whole being. Even when he makes mistakes (a la NEW MOON), he does so because he loves her so unbelievably much and wants the best for her. You captured this scene so well. It was perfectly written. Stephenie would be proud.

that's a good story. Alice was really funny.

Great EPOV.