please update and add when u get the chance

please and thanks

will be waiting for the update

this is my favorite story ever.

when is there going to be more chapters? i love this storie.

great! write some more!

LOL! Poor Remy xD Update soon

Haha, Tadpoles...
And David being with another man? Not bad, I should say. Interesting visual...LOL
Update Soon!

Ew...I hate Tempest. :/ I love Remy, though! Lol...please, update soon. I can't wait 'till the guys come back to life. :D

awesome story pleas eupdate soon

Awesome last few chapters! Sorry I couldn't keep updated, my computer's been on the fritz for near 6 months now and NO ONE is making any kind of hurry to fix it! *pouts*

Anyway, nice!

Love this story! I've never read one like it. Update soon please!

Great Story, please keep updating!!

David sat down in his chair and I began to think this over. What if I didn’t want to stay in his pack? What if I was miserable killing people for food?

“What if I didn’t help you, I mean I can’t take back killing Candy, but now I’m a full vampire, do I have to follow you?” I asked.

David looked at me in shock.

“You could try and run, but I’d find you, and it won’t matter if I killed you, I do need your blood”

I gulped at this, and somehow I knew he wasn’t bluffing.

There was a long silence then David grinned. “You can come out now girls,” he called.

I looked behind me as two girls walked into the cave and stood next to David. A short redhead and a tall brunette. The ** from my apartment that went missing? She was a vampire?! Well that’s a twist on things…

“Girls, this is Honey, the newest member of the family."

Brilliant! Keep up your awesome writing!

WOH OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! I LOVE YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON PLEASE?PLEASE!

great story i love this. who does tempist remind david of let me guess Paul right... cant wait for more. The girls are gonna fall for the ones they remind David of that woudl be great.

/alyx

This is an amazing story!
I can't wait to read more.