loved totally.

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That was a good story! I wish it was longer though!

update soon'

love story

love your story

update soon

LOVED IT D

like your story! update soon!

OMG loved it plz hurry

loved 'IT' PLZ HURRY

and dont make the wildcats lose ever

plz dont make her break up with troy make them talk and jordan confess but none gabriella or jordan known that troy was listening

I would have liked the chapter a bit longer, because when a chapter is longer, it contains more details about the story.

It would have been good if you could make it longer.

Thank you,

It was a good chapter, except it gets a bit confusing when you don't break up the speaking. Sometimes Gabriella or Troy says something twice and it gets confusing because it's not identified.

Try to separate the speaking using different lines, for example:

"Gabriella"

"Troy"

"Gabriella." "Gabriella"

or you could have them also on separate lines, and say something on the end of it, for example:

"Gabriella," Troy calls.

On the other hand, it was a good chapter, although I would have liked it to involve more of Jordan's trouble to make it more interesting.

Update soon,

omg loved it plz hurry

loved it but i think u should but spaces u know like

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do u get it?

It was a good story but I would have liked the writing to have been broken up into paragraphs.

The story-line in this story is interesting, please continue the story.

Thank you,