|Reviews for School Rivals|
| LoveLifeHopeHappiness 12/7/08 . chapter 10
| intensewhatever 11/28/08 . chapter 10
That was a good story! I wish it was longer though!
| Charlie Belle 9/10/08 . chapter 9
| Charlie Belle 8/28/08 . chapter 7
love your story
| nesquick-s 8/28/08 . chapter 7
LOVED IT D
| MM612 8/27/08 . chapter 6
like your story! update soon!
| nesquick-s 8/27/08 . chapter 6
OMG loved it plz hurry
| nesquick-s 8/25/08 . chapter 4
loved 'IT' PLZ HURRY
and dont make the wildcats lose ever
| nesquick-s 8/24/08 . chapter 3
plz dont make her break up with troy make them talk and jordan confess but none gabriella or jordan known that troy was listening
| agent.bear 8/24/08 . chapter 3
I would have liked the chapter a bit longer, because when a chapter is longer, it contains more details about the story.
It would have been good if you could make it longer.
| agent.bear 8/22/08 . chapter 2
It was a good chapter, except it gets a bit confusing when you don't break up the speaking. Sometimes Gabriella or Troy says something twice and it gets confusing because it's not identified.
Try to separate the speaking using different lines, for example:
or you could have them also on separate lines, and say something on the end of it, for example:
"Gabriella," Troy calls.
On the other hand, it was a good chapter, although I would have liked it to involve more of Jordan's trouble to make it more interesting.
| nesquick-s 8/22/08 . chapter 2
omg loved it plz hurry
| nesquick-s 8/20/08 . chapter 1
loved it but i think u should but spaces u know like
do u get it?
| agent.bear 8/20/08 . chapter 1
It was a good story but I would have liked the writing to have been broken up into paragraphs.
The story-line in this story is interesting, please continue the story.