What a fine way to sort everything out XD Though if would be blind temporarily and out right then, I surely wouldn't start to **, no matter what. But men are men... ^^' Not complaining though... XD

Wow. Vaan, silent? Only with a spell...or a tongue in the way. Awesome story. And yes, it is annoying when it's come, instead of **.

aww I love this story! the whole blind and silence thing really intrigued me to read it, a good summary is what brings in readers so you've done that well. just today I was playing this and vaan was silenced and I was like "balthier nows yur chance to dirty him up!" xD haha anyways it was great uhh i give it five stars? ten? what's the limit arrgh?! o.o

Ahaha!
I love that ending. Makes me want to play the game, blind balthier, silence Vaan and watch them make sweet love. :D

Nice story, and interesting note!^^
i might use come in my stories instead of **.
I always thought it had soomething somehow vulgar to it.
Thank you!^^

X-Keep on writing!-X

that was thuper hot. nice to know they'd pick delicious gaspy sex over reviving a comrade. it's what leading men do i guess. thanks for the "come" not "**" lesson! :D

I agree with you about the 'come' and '**' bit at the end.
It sh!ts me to no end when I read, "I'm **!"
It's just... gah.


ANYWAY. :D

This was quite the read.
Great job on the detail.

I don't think I can ever look at Balthier being blind and Vaan being silence the same ever again without thinking that xD. Really interesting. I'll look forward to more works from you.