it's just great-wa i so totally like it. it would be great it you made a seque.

Gaah! I gonna cry! This is so sweet! Thanks for the story! It brightened my mood up 5 notches! :)

Aw, the ending was so cute! And the lemon...Let's just say I need a blood transfusion <__<
The only problem I have with this story is when Hiruma said "...return to Japan where we’ll buy a farm house in the country and maybe even raise a family." Yeah, returning to Japan makes sense, but a farm house? Sorry, but that doesn't really seem like Hiruma's style xD
But don't get me wrong! I adore this fanfic. I can't wait to read more of your works.

-squeals incoherently for a while- That was adorable! (And so hot too! Whew!) ♥ Perfect! ♥ Good job, there! I loved this so much! ♥

Nothing to say but...SO SWET XD
Thank you for an amazing fanfics EVER

thank you

OH MY GOD THAT IS SO ** CUTE!! XD LOVE YOU!! WRITE MORE!! :D

..i f*cking love you for this!! so cute!! hot!! adorable!! sexy!! hot!! (again?? -.-'') and breathtaking! you're a writing genious! thank you!! Thank You!

Aw! So cute! Thanks for the upload, HirumaxSena forever!
The only thing that I have to say is that you have a little grammer error.

"Sena bit back a moan of need as he curled his fingers at the nape of Hiruma’s neck, caressing the baby-soft hair and then twisting his fingers into the thicker lockers."

I think you ment to say locks but...Sorry for critisizing! I just have to point out grammer issues, it's just who I am!

Great job! Like I said earlier, thanks for the upload~!

XO,
Ludolicious

This is the best story EVER!

That was soo cute~!

*sighs* It was so sweet ^^

E~! So cute at the end there. It was a dirty tactic to make poor Sena so horny before a match, though. ^^ I enjoyed this a lot, though there were a few errors near the beginning with a few sentences in bold for no apparent reason. I like your characterization of Hiruma, especially when he randomly pulled out an automatic.

I admit, the hinted mpreg has me a little hesitant. Mostly because it's something that just...can't happen. (Unless Sena was once a woman. If s/he was once a woman, then there's an interesting subplot to the manga that I'm simply not aware of.)

Excellent writing, please write more!

Wow. Just. WOW. I'm so glad 85% of hirusena fanfic writers come up with such amazing fanfics! yours is undoubtedly delish and a joy to read. the idea of them being steady yet playing in different teams, and bringing all that lust into their games... it's enough to make a girl fan herself (and the fact Sena is still petite enough to fit his high school uniform almost made me faint). The explicit scene was all musk and honey, i really can't say much about it, it's just wonderful.

Hiruma and Sena are very much in character, I especially loved the proposal scene, which wasn't cheesy yet held a romantic air around it. The conversation was so fitting for them, Hiruma hiding his anxiety behind a threat (loved how he pictured married to Sena decades to come) and Sena cowering and accepting as if he had no choice.

By the way, I lol'ed at the fact Hiruma will be Deimon's principle, as if he hadn't enough power when he was a student.

I would love to see more EY21 fanfics from you, you did a great job portraying them and, well, it was super special awesome ^^

Aw that was scarely cute lol. Greeat job portraying Hiruma and Sena.