This was so deliciously dark and I have to say I ate up every single word. You have such an endearing style to your writing :D. From my point of view, even though I'm a huge fan of Raphael, it was nice to see him being challenged so brazenly. Also, I thought his characterization was absolutley perfect. Hope you write some more Cass/Raph soon.

With regards,

ZagaraVale

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I'm speechless. I'm SO very happy to find another person who loves this couple. You write very good. You write much better than very good. I just can put them into better words. This is awesome! It's so going into my faves!

PS. I saw in Emerald Silent Eyes profile about you and your friend Kamitose. You two are amazing. I wish I could write like you one day.

She also wrote in her profile at how people are mocking this couple. That's certainly not cool. T_T

Every time I read one of your stories I'm reminded why your one of my favorite authors this was wonderful. Bravo

Oh, how could I miss this wonderful story?

In true honesty, I usually stray far from pairings and romance. However, since I've become curious of how other authors portray Raphael's character, I stumbled into one of your latest stories.

Your style of writing beautifully sets the dark mood between Cassandra and Raphael. I love the deep feeling of betrayal that runs through Raphael as he gazes upon his creation. Absolutely thrilling.

"You took so much pleasure in destroying her all those years ago" - my favourite line. :D

There was a tiny little thing that was wrong that I found: you lack a space between "deignedto". Truly not your fault I believe. 's imperfect editor is to blame for it for I have experienced automatic deletions of spaces between words.

Well, I wish you luck on completing your project!

I already told you on LJ how much I love this fic. This really is quite amazing! I always love it when innocent characters get corrupted like that. Cassandra being evil is just delightful to read. Although, I wonder, who killed Sophitia, was it Cassandra or Raphael? Or someone else? Hmm anyhow, I think you do well with Raphael's voice. He's hard to do.