 Icy Cake 2008-09-19 . chapter 1Oh, how could I miss this wonderful story?
In true honesty, I usually stray far from pairings and romance. However, since I've become curious of how other authors portray Raphael's character, I stumbled into one of your latest stories.
Your style of writing beautifully sets the dark mood between Cassandra and Raphael. I love the deep feeling of betrayal that runs through Raphael as he gazes upon his creation. Absolutely thrilling.
"You took so much pleasure in destroying her all those years ago" - my favourite line. :D
There was a tiny little thing that was wrong that I found: you lack a space between "deignedto". Truly not your fault I believe. 's imperfect editor is to blame for it for I have experienced automatic deletions of spaces between words.
Well, I wish you luck on completing your project! |
 Kamitose 2008-08-20 . chapter 1I already told you on LJ how much I love this fic. This really is quite amazing! I always love it when innocent characters get corrupted like that. Cassandra being evil is just delightful to read. Although, I wonder, who killed Sophitia, was it Cassandra or Raphael? Or someone else? Hmm anyhow, I think you do well with Raphael's voice. He's hard to do. |