Did I like it?...PSH...I frickin loved it!! Nice job!

I really like this!

ok, I'm not sure u know but this story is also put in the place of ur other story, Be Mine,Valentine. i like this story though.

This si a really good story. i loved it

i loved it! this is probably the longest one-shot ever!

LOVE IT! I am a huge fan of Blackwater!

hm... Jacob hasn't imprinted on Renesme?? Embry has?? That's something new... I wonder if Bella would consider that a change for the better or the worse? : P

Really good characterization of Leah.
"You have to learn how to control your thoughts or else...well… you were just screwed." That sounds about right. :)
A drunken Leah... that sounds like begging for her to do something stupid... or rash... or reckless... or all three...
"Basically, from the neck up, she looked pretty. The rest of her looked like trash." wow. good description.
Aw... Jacob is so sweet... it's so nice of him to take care of her like that. Especially when he does not have to.
screw being honest, huh? That sounds very Leah-like. :P
"“You want to know what Quil and I talked about? You want to know why I been so uptight lately? We talked about you and how I freaking felt about you, okay?!” I could feel my heartbeat hammering in my chest and I knew he could hear it too, just like Quil said. “I like you Jacob Black! That’s the truth that you so desperately wanted to know!”

I didn’t feel free. I actually felt heart-broken from the look Jacob was giving me. See? I was right. He just felt sorry for me. Nothing changed." wow. very emotional. I like the outburst, though.

Overall, a great fic. I really liked it. :)

SO GOOD! I love blackwater stories and this one is by far at the top of the list :)

Aw.

This is so swet!

In a Leah kinda way.

=P

good story!

Nice, cute little fic. Aside from the minor flaws others have pointed out, I find it hard to believe that Jacob would get over Bella if he hadn't imprinted on Renesmee. But I really enjoyed the whole party scene (kinda reminded me of 10 things I hate about you, maybe just coincidince) and thought that that part was written the best. The flashbacks were okay but I didn't like the change in PoV. Still, I don't have many things to criticize about this one. Nicely done, and worth the read.

Very cute. Some things to watch out for...
Leah's hair is Black.
Leah is older than Jacob.
Leah is 21 in Breaking Dawn, or at least really close to that age...
other than that, loved it. very nicely written.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

good job! :D

i really like this i love jacob and leah together too too bad its not like this in breaking dawn embry could have imprinted on nessie and jake could have been with leah but that didnt happen guh. anyway love your story

I like it - Leah's thoughts were really funny. Bu you made them kindda of out of character. And Leah's not blonde, nor have green eyes. I mean, she's an American native. o.o
Anyway, funny and cute story, but you should try to stay more true to the books - or warn about the OOCsiness (?) in the beggining, hahaha.