wow that was unbelievable! it was so real. the first time i read it i cried and i don't cry easily :). great job

I know I sound like a teacher when I say this but:GOOD WORD CHOICE!
that was just pure talent right there...

wow, that was soo good good job!

*sniffle*

Wow. Well done.

That was. . . heartbreaking. And yet, at the same time, it's nice to see how Edward suffered. Not that I like to see Edward in pain - quite the opposite, but it gives a kind of closure to the whole thing, since I know it turns out well ^_^

Fin...
And I release my breath. That was divine. Thank you.