I LIKE IT!

two words and I know I shouldnt swear but this is fucking brilliant. Oh god I so wish you would write a sequel but after so many years I fear that will not happen. Thanks fopr writing this

Wow! I realize this was written a very very very long time ago, but that was amazing! I'm normally not much of one for slash but on a whim i decided to go ahead and give your story a try and im so glad i did! Very tastefully done and beutifully written! I wish you had more for me to read! You are an amazing author!

I like the way you write (ex. detailed descriptions) but you almost lost me at this chapter. The verbiage is all wrong for the characters- I don't think any of them were in character at all. Obviously you wrote this a long time ago and I'm not sure you'll ever read this, but if you do and you continue to write, I'd try and keep characters believable.

Absolutely beautiful.

oh my goodness. its been spring break over here, and ive taken it upon myself to download a few fics to my phone for reading whenever. ive been stuck on a 700 page one for a while, and i needed a break. what better break than a cute drarry fic from a new writer?

i was hooked.

i absolutely love your writing style and ideas. i also thoroughly enjoyed how you made it about their love and not using it to fight.

wonderful concept, you kept me very well entertained for a good 24 hours 3

wonderful, wonderful job.

-meg

(ps, i loved the story before i even read it, due to reading your profile. so cute)

Hmm. This story has been quite amusing, but I think it lacks your knowledge of what love is.

I mean, you openly come out and have everyone say that they love Harry, that what they feel is love, that love is about infatuation and brushing hands/butterflies in stomach.

But those are all just words. Love is an emotion, not just a word. You seem to toss it around too much, making it seem like it doesn't matter. You need to use other words to express what love is-you need to write more on thoughts and feelings that the characters are having. You have Draco saying,"It's love," instead of "I love him/you," and I'm looking out for a part when Draco or Harry actually care about each other, or are concerned with each other's well-being, or feel a strong rush of emotions pile on them.

There isn't a part.

I know I shouldn't be moaning, because this is fanfiction and everyone is entitled to write about whatever they want, but I think the story could be so much better if it included a bit more insight. L. L.

I'm intrigued! I wonder what'll happen now?

Hahahahaha! Hilarious! Though, what Harry's mates did for him was kind of heartfelt-it's the sort if thing my friends and I would do! _;

Um. That was slightly...disturbing. Couldn't you have just done the touching handselectricity thing? Very bad, bad images of Mr Tumnus running around in my mind. Eurgh. But good chapter anyway!

Oh my god! I love it already! This first chapter was soooo funny! And brilliant, of course. This is really enjoyable and quite easy to read. Boy, wizards are lazy buggers, aren't they? ;-) I think Harry's 'way' is better though...

Love how you included Hate.Draco.Malfoy. here. Heehee. We all know what's coming. Err, figuratively and literally

wow just wow... the story, the plot, your writing style... just wow...

You should work on the lenght of your paragraphs.. It's way too long and it's too heavy for everyone to read.

I am sorry to say that I haven't reviewed the previous chapters of this book. I really should have, but I was too 'caught up in the magic', you could say.

What I really love about this story is the honesty and innocence of it, and also the true passion and attention to detail you have shown through your words. You have created a tale of sound reasoning, with humour and romance, sorrow and intelligence. I was lead on a journey into the hearts and minds if the characters in this tale, and you made them so believable that I could find no fault. I also found the pure Britishness of your words highly enjoyable, as they are so inkeeping with the Britishness of the Harry Potter books themselves. It is the little things that really ice this litarary cake- the upper class pet names, "Harry old boy",that are so inkeeping with Draco's background, and the seemingly effortless conjuring of tea things of Dumbledore, along with the little games he plays with his staff, the beverage game being my favourite.

Please c

Totally Awesome!