Very good, but you spelled "peace" as "piece" in a place where it's not really easy to ignore.

I can see why some people dislike Nodoka, but her odd sense of honor and obsession with manliness is a lot easier to forgive then Genma's crimes.

I do have to question the idea that she would ask Ranma to commit seppuku over his fear of cats, it really would not have much weight compared to his curse,

Genma on the other hand might not get the chance to commit seppuku before she killed him, if she found out the full details of the neko ken training

Nice story. Most EXCELLENT distraction at the end. I like dthe smooth-going feeling of the fic. And I laughed my @$$ end off at the end there.

Lookin' forward to the next chapter of 'Forever The Tomboy' and 'Contrast Match'.

Nice little chapter, although it felt a little choppy with the several short letters and short scenes in between. I'm enjoying it.

I wonder what's next. Perhaps a young man just graduated from high school, watching a videotape showing scenes of his mother's pregnancy (carrying himself) and, after the tastefully discreet but profanity-ridden birthing process, a shot of his father (as a red-haired woman) breastfeeding him?

Sweet part there, and liked how Tofu finally got his head out, and Kasumi got over her cluelessness.

yo... excellent work with this.. Great job, keep going.

Great story :)

Great to read Kasumi finally got her man ;)

Just read the 3 chapters, darn good, looking forward to how Akane handles Nodoka. I favor Akane cutting the bitches head off with her own katana but I sure that is not going to happen.

You have done a good job, pretty much in character from what I can tell. Of course I despise most of the cast as written by Takahashi, did I spell that right? In Shakespearian terms every cast member has a tragic flaw, a flaw that completely overshadows any redeeming traits. Although your Cologne has redeemed herself some in this story.

So keep writing

PS you remember the old saying "The truth sets you free"? Many add to that, "But first it pisses you off."

Thanks.

Nice but sad little shot here, and felt sorry for Shampoo, and glad that Ranma was alive, as well as with who he thought was his love. Good job.

Please continue this fic. Please. It's well-written, it tells a story from different perspectives without being... well, it flows. I like that.

Take care and thanks for sharing.

I liked the story and i want to hear what the viewpoints from the other characters in Ranma universes.

I really liked these 2 pieces, especially the Genma story. It's not often you get a good portrayal of Genma, normally he's the 'evil pop'.
Looking forward to reading more perspectives here, keep up the good work.
Wishing you great inspiration,
~Squiffy

*applauds both chapters*

I say continue. This story has a lot of potential. It's well written, and has an original idea attached. It provides the necessary hook to keep readers interested and the characters are pretty much accurate,at least I think so. So please keep writing, I can't wait to see where you go with this.

I like this. Please continue writing.