Whoa, confusing. But still good. I agree with the rest of the readers - write a sequel!

That was eerie. You're gonna write a sequel where Darien comes out of the coma aren't ya?

Please!PLEASE!PLEASE! LET HIM WAKE UP! YOU NEED TO WRITE ANOTHER PART TO THIS WHERE HE WAKES UP! Maybe you could have him in the coma for a year or two, if you want to give the characters plenty of time to angst, but then you could have him have some sort of miracle recovery. Maybe just after they've all given up hope of him ever coming out of the coma. Just PLEASE don't just leave him in the coma/dreamworld! It's cruel (to him and to me)! Yes, I know I talk like he's a real person, he's as real as I want him to be (insanity will do that to you)! Please consider adding to this! It's really good, if you would just add another chapter to give closure (preferably happy but sad would be better than none)! Sara V.

NEVER MIND! You are so MEAN! Not even I would do that...and that's saying something.

Cool beginning. I always wanted to know what it would be like to have Fawkes dead. Very interesting...

that story had me really confused until the end. I liked it but you can't just leave Darien! Save Him save him save him!

Woah, that was SERIOUSLY trippy! Oh man that was good! I had a feeling he'd be in acoma or something similar to that. I guessing he was having something like an O.B.E. when he was walking around like that. Probably his mind was creating a state of consiousness where everything seemed like that of normal life... oh nevermind. I think Claire is starting to get to me. Anywhozle, it was a wonderful story and I can't wait for more of them!

right now I don't get it, but I'm gonna read more

Oooh . . . Freaky story : ) The plots been used, but they way you used it is orignal. the begining could of been a bit less abrupt, but all in all, a good story.

He doesn't wake up? You can't do that to Darien!

AAAAHHHHHHHHH! WAKE HIM UP! PLEASE PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE WITH SUGAR AND JELLY-BEANS AND QUICKSILVER ON TOP! sARA v.

i liked it it was almost as good as the tv show keep up the good work

NO! That sux! Very good twisted ending! You're a very good author, Joanne. props.

ARGH! You're killing me! Poor Darien, I thought for sure it was some kind of crazy dream or something!

Very good, caught me completely by surprise

What? That's the end? No way!