 CGreene 2009-11-21 . chapter 9hey love the story! It's truly amazing.
i found this typo 'blood was in his alcohol system' it made me laugh but thought you might want to fix it. its near the bottom of the page when they were talking about the kidnappers DUI
love the story though! |
 Blue-Eyed Chica 2009-08-10 . chapter 14OMG LOVE IT! |
 majorbookluver 2009-02-28 . chapter 14wow, that was a great story! very well written, great job. |
 Yokai no Miko 2008-09-07 . chapter 14Did you repost this story or something? I mean, after every chapter you ask for reviews... but the whole thing was posted in one day... Oh well, I'd just like to point out that you'd have more reviews if you'd staggered the updates even if it is a repost and I positively love this story! You're definitely a favorite author! |
 Lady Lemons 2008-08-24 . chapter 6Well you certainly summed things up quite nicely at the end.
So for celebration I'll bring the desserts! Party party party... |
 Lady Lemons 2008-08-24 . chapter 4Oh, I can just see the look Henry would be giving Lassie.
Loved the last bit; "Now he had to deal with the department's pet psychic and their mascot too?"
Another great chapter! |
 OnlyANorthernSong 2008-08-24 . chapter 14Awesome story! I loved it. :) |
 Lady Lemons 2008-08-24 . chapter 3This is a really interesting set up you created. I like the dilema Lassie is in. Although I totally think the jewel thing is a set-up for someone who wants to 'get' Shawn. However, the Juliet being pregnant arc provides great character moments. I love the Shules ship, so great work so far. I'm just going to keep moving through the fic.
Kudos |
 California-Italian 2008-08-20 . chapter 14Dude! Somebody else totally thinks that the chief already knows! (my friends don't believe me)
Good story!
I really liked it! |