I hope that you continue this story. There are many things I like about it, such as how you have set up the characterization and your use of dialogue. I think that the premise has alot of potential if you decide to continue it.

I really like this story! Update soon!

o_O This deserves a ton of reviews. Though it's your first (and apparently only) story in the CV fandom, it's very well written, and I don't like AoS/DoS. It stinks that you never wrote anything else after that because I liked it.

(PS - I saw that you faved, then unfaved my OoE story. If it helps any I think I'm gonna take it down for rework. -_- I don't like the way it's looking so far and I should be writing the story when my mind isn't fogged by colds/flu!)