awsome

OMG i love this story! Its kinda like mine Dawns a mermaid who goes to land because she was forced to marry, read my story it might give you some ideas! Please update

UPDATE SOON. i really wanna know whats gonna happen nxt!

Update update update update update update... *is bricked*

Me likey this story! Please update!

i really love it please post more! .

Plz hurry abd update both ur pokemon stories! Their awesome!

here's my review!: UPDATE! Or, actually, write more!

When will Dawn learn to walk?

thanks

earlymorninglight1

Omg I love this story! And now May is coming in! YAY! I cannot wait for you to update!

I LOVED THAT! PLZ WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON! PLZ! THX

This is a pretty good story so far. Continue as soon as you can. Check my own story out sometime when you have the time.

Well, since you like reviews and I want to continue reading, let's make a deal. You keep updating reguarly and I'll keep reviewing reguarly, deal?

No serious I really like this story. It's really funny how Dawn can't walk and stuff.

So keep up the good work :P

heyaz

i found some more surnames { soz if i repeat some}

Dawn Berlitz

Zoey Volek

Paul Masters

Misty Waterflower

May Maple

Drew Morgan or Drew Rodderick

Brock Harrsion or Brock Slate

x3 Well That Was...Interesting.

:D Update Soon

“Yup. Random girls appearing at the beach sure is normal.”

lol

that was good chappie...even if it was short. heck, short stories is what builds up a good foundation. and milk makes strong bones.

update soon

Hi! i think this story is pretty good! i am So adding you to my authors list! well i g2g so i'll keep reviewing! Please continue this story!

-Snow