 Bendleshnitz 2009-10-18 . chapter 1LOVELY!! ♥ |
 xx-JacintaLuvsYa-xx 2009-10-17 . chapter 1Cute! |
 ElAmorComienza 2009-09-07 . chapter 1Really sweet and nice... |
 xXxrockablegirlxXx 2009-08-19 . chapter 1so cute =]
i loved it!
~~xRGx |
 Miz636 2009-08-17 . chapter 1That was good. Sweet as well. |
 Ferrum 2009-08-11 . chapter 1Simple and very lovely. Love it. |
 Pamee' 2009-07-13 . chapter 1aww! that was so cuute! Loove iit! <3!! |
 Paperback28 2009-06-23 . chapter 1Hehe... again, I like-e the story! I like the repeated structure, the way you described the scenes... just about everything! Great job on this story, keep writing! :) |
 BlindingPinkObsession 2009-04-12 . chapter 1This was an adorable drabble! I think you captured the emotions!! I really liked the format of the five emotions. |
 Rianne 2009-04-07 . chapter 1 Way cute. :D |
 Qualia Des 2009-03-13 . chapter 1-squeals at the cuteness- |
 sarahbrasil 2009-02-13 . chapter 1adorable!
my god, i´m such a scorpius/rose shipper that it´s getting ridiculous!
love drabbles.
it´s short, pleasant and you can read abouth a thousand in one day! |
 CatNap 2008-12-09 . chapter 1perfect. |
 bhavana02 2008-12-07 . chapter 1I absolutely love your Rose/Scorpius stories...I can't believe I've been missing a few! This was great, very sweet, short yet progressive...and mention of Rose's parents is always welcome :) |
 Anomalous Anonymous 2008-12-04 . chapter 1So EVEN THOUGH you didn't make a guess on the big guns, your apology was so sweet, I couldn't help myself. :)
(That, and I was in serious need of good reading material.)
So onto the review proper:
Fantastically handled, even though I'm obviously more of a Asp/Scorp shipper myself :). Your Scorpius seems sweet and awkward and shy and perfect. Love the repetition of the "she can't remember..." and then the final closing line summed it all up nicely.
The Hogsmeade trip was cute, and the blankets after the snowball fight actually made me "aw" out loud, which was rather awkward, as I'm at work. Ahem.
But fantastically handled and well done--kudos! |