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Reviews for: Betrayer Betrayed
zenbon zakura
2009-04-11 . chapter 3
O.o
lady is doing quiet the job of taming he two bros frm shopping each other o confeti... or vergil cutting dante to confetti in his weakened state...
Hunter of Darkness
2009-04-06 . chapter 3
I'm so happy you updated!! Just what I needed. Keep up the good work!
Eric Draven201
2009-04-06 . chapter 3
Welcome back and thank you for the lovely read. It will be interesting to see how you will play this... Lady being motherly and Vergil's ambivalence at actually caring for Dante. Great job as always.
The Hecateae
2009-04-06 . chapter 3
:D You're back! Great chapter btw. Um, but you meant swing his sword like a maniac, and not manic right?
Mayo2198
2009-01-14 . chapter 2
I love your story, can't wait to read more!^_^
bluewolf8000
2008-11-29 . chapter 2
omg this was the best story i've ever read. it's so great the way you wrote it, please please please update soon! i love this story so much and it's driving me crazy cause i want to know what happens next. again, great story thanks for writing it.
ladysubaru83
2008-11-08 . chapter 2
oh man come on finish it quickly plz XS
Mistress of Destruction
2008-09-05 . chapter 2
This is really good so far. I've seen a few other fics where Vergil and Dante have become human, but this is my favorite thus far. I just hope that unlike all those other fics you are actually able to complete this one. Hopefully you can update soon again, cause I can't wait to read more!
Eric Draven201
2008-09-04 . chapter 2
:O WOW! Really... powerful, gut-wretching stuff (and only on the second chapter no less)! Truly beyond words, I really don't know what to say... this just blows any and all things I have out of the water! O:

I need more! Please update soon, okay? =P
The Hecateae
2008-09-04 . chapter 2
New chapter! *Cheers*
Dhuaine
2008-08-31 . chapter 1
Sounds great! Fics with human!Dante or Vergil can be counted on one's fingers, and I can't recall any that reached any significant ending... which is a pity, because I'm fascinated by this theme! ;) I'm especially thrilled to see such a fic being written by you. It's like... guarantee of quality. ;)
Can't wait for next chapter!
The Hecateae
2008-08-24 . chapter 1
Cool!
bunnyears
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
great start...looking forward for the next chapter.
please update soon!
Hunter of Darkness
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
Wow, awesome story! I'm looking forward to the update. Keep up the good work!
Eric Draven201
2008-08-20 . chapter 1
Awesome chapter Luce. I would like to definitely see more of this!
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