keep on going!will ristuka finally punish soubi?!please!

Beautiful beginning even a little painful. Good work. :)
Keep writing.

...um, how soon will you be updating this?

I'll be waiting impatiently for the next/last chapter. I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I vote that way too. I think with your talents, you could take Ritsuka and Soubi's physical relationship forward in a sensitive manner. Looking forward to it!

Aw... ;; This fic is so sweet! Please keep going! Good job.

ooh.nice chappie.
can i have a satisfying ending that requires a sequel that shows a future soubi and ritsuka?
andAND can the sequel have the happy ending with earless ritsuka??
X))
but since you're the writer,i can only bow before you and say,"oh mighty author,may the next chapter be as awesome and come speedily."=D

Happy ending please, I love this story. Wouldn't it be awesome if his scar suddenly said Beloved :D. Lemons are good if done tastefully. I think you could get away with a nice lime though. :) I'm so sad to hear this is the end of this story, I really think you could take it further if you wanted to. ;) Anyways, gotta run.

Very good, emotional chapter. For the last chapter, can it please, please, please have a happy ending? I can't stand sad endings. I think a lemon if you can make it work. But it doesn't seem to fit the atmosphere of the story at the moment. Anyway, can't wait for the next update^^

all i have you ask, is there is a happy ending... i love the story so far, and can't wait to see how it ends, happy or not ( HAPPY PLEASE!)

Very cool! Can't wait for the next chapter!

great story! i love it! please, please update soon! i can't wait to read more!!

aw, i like this story.
everyone act like they should.
its really good, cant wait for more!

so cute please write more soon

This is good. I hope they can work things out. The tension is so tangible and hot. Will there be a lemon in the future?

Aw, I thought it was interesting! ^^ But so short! :(